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Its a generic novel.
The idea of forger transmigrator is interesting, but the execution is pathetic.
The mc is same old mc trait, but barely on intellectual spectrum, but the other side characters only a handful of them actually have brain.
The story is boring, world building pretty much almost non-existent i can’t imagine the whole beijing (heh) and the forging division, character improvement is decent and thats it like a bean sprouting and then stagnant, the plot is mediocre, the leveling system is unclear.
Meh.
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The story for so far is going well including the character development. The world development is awesome.
The main character of this novel made the difference.
it's an funny novel with the system is type of op, pacing of these 40 chapters were good too will wait for more.
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4.4
Very high potential.
Translation is iffy at times.
Hopefully, more updates.
Story isn’t school BS or 1v1 background duels, arrogant bxstards aren’t trying to kill in public as pro assasins used, while dudes robbing and tryin to survive.
Characters can reason and negotiate without holding death grudges. Have their backgrounds shape their personality but not define it.
World is good.
I just readrhe first 20 chapters and I really like this story. I've read a lot of cultivation stories and I'm not really into them but this one is well written and Interesting and the MC is well written and interesting as he does what he does. he actually feels alive a
I have a habit of noting down Pros and Cons when I give a book review.
So starting with the Pros:
I definitely feel there is an interesting plot here. I was curious to see where the main storyline actually began. You have written a good summary as well. It made me want to read on to get to the actual plot of the book. I feel you have good setup for your lead character for his eventual character growth. Guy is at this worst point and struggles with his current lifestyle. It gave me the impression that he'll eventually grow out of that and I was intrigued as to find out how he would do so.
Now for the cons:
There are a large number of grammar and punctuation mistakes throughout your book. It was almost jarring to read some of the setences because of this. You have also used many words incorrectly. I found several instances where you have used certain words which have a completely different meaning that what you intended. I would strongly suggest to recheck your earlier chapters because the mistakes there are quite vast. Lastly, I found the first 4 chapters to be very slow. Not much happens. I understand you were trying to show the readers that Guy is living in very bad conditions but honestly, it's been dragged on way too long. I was looking forward to get to the actual plot but it was chapter after chapter of Guy hating his life. Felt unnecessary.
Overall I feel the amounts of mistakes I found definitely hindered the experience for me. I do believe this story could be very interesting, judging by the summary. I wish there was more focus on the plot and less dragged out descriptions of Guy's lifestyle. I wish you all the best because you have potential for improvement. I'd really like to give it another read once you've made a couple of changes.
Love these genres type book, magic, and horror it was like a fantasy, go-ahead author keep writing [img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
great story, Author. The mix of modern and fantasy stories is a very good combination. I really like this story. I will always look forward to the continuation. Good health, always my favorite author.
An amazing story, I like how th Mc is overpowered and how he can do things at will, he isn’ restricted by things like a system, and for the women in his harem he doesn’t keep them as useless flower vases, he helps them get stronger. Over all it’s a great novel