As the author it is a given that I will give myself a good review.
This may be my first work but I have some great ideas for this story, though it might take some time for me to get there.
I hope you will enjoy my own version of an apocalypse story as much as I will writing it.
very decent novel, it's not the exact same as other cultivation novels, but a few similarities, i hope that the author does make the character a bit more modern with retorts etc, but I Would say give it a read...while its free...
Like seriously why no update?
Why bother picking it up when you drop it at the critical moment?
Are you having fun in doing this
Author Here; Supporting his work as usual. This is a promising novel for many, if you have a knack for a lot of fight scenes, game setting, rankings war, guild wars, kingdoms wars and even some wars that trascend the balance of equality and are transcendental, this novel is for you. Of course, while it may seem as though romance has no place in the novel from the start, I'd say it's quite romantic. Hmm, what again? well I don't have a proofreader yet but I can promise the errors are minimal, of course getting a proofreader is something I'm working on. If you are interested too you can contact me on discord.
Fantastic and interesting novel. The story and the writing quality is so fantastic as it never bores me, I really like how the pace of the story is going. Good work!
pure trash. for starters it is unreadable with all the errors and Grammer problems. if I'm going to pay to read something I don't want to feel like I'm proofreading a third graders creative writing project. 2nd I already read this book but it was written by Jksmanga WTH the only original part is the cat. how does stuff like this get signed and then shoved down our thoughts in recommended novels? this should be taken down error corrected and then blacklisted for plagerism
Finally the author is back. I loved the prequel of this novel and have high hopes for this novel. Fortunately, it has quick updates. Eagerly waiting for Azaroth and his retainers.
It's a good story and has more potential.
Waiting for more chapters
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I can’t understand what the author is trying to say I understand if your English is bad but this is just terrible it feels like half the writing is just random words to fill the chapter.
This is Great stuff, I like your writing style and the story is interesting. Its good start and I'm interested in seeing more of this stuff. I'll be checking up on it. Its got potential. Keep up the good work!
I like this alot, as an amateur gunsmith who learned in a professional environment although the knowledge shown is somewhat superficial in regards to firearms and tactics in some ways it does scratch my itch, my only issue is updating frequency, I wish the author would just update and rhere would be like 15 translated chapters for me to binge through in one sitting, overall a great piece of fiction to pass the time to, this novel is a piece of fresh air and at least the author did some research because many on this platform I've tried before have none and its overall a horrible read for those because the people are writing scenes involving firearms when they know next to nothing about them to an extent they will confuse a clip with a magazine or because of lack of knowledge do ludicrous fight scenes like a person going in for close combat with a combat knife when they have the high ground and an advantage and it could be ended in seconds with one well placed shot but because they don't know the rifle the character has is accurate at that range they go in and do a melee battle because that's all they are familiar with, in real life gun fights only take at most a minute or two to kill your opponent typically, but obviously it depends, I like this novel where the character had his mind wired up focused where he acknowledges every detail like a super computer making detailed descriptions for us the reader of something that happens in seconds, meaning something that could be anticlimactic, because of the authors skill turns into something epic, I just hope he doesn't stretch fight scenes into like 8 chapters for something that was only 3 minutes of action in actuality. Overall I love this, write more so I can binge!
Overall, I love the premise and dark story. The first few chapters could use a little work with Grammarly but I love how the story is goingKeep up the good work.