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"I wonder what sort of trouble this will bring?" He thought to himself amused and worried at the same time, flipping his palm a dark, gritty light that danced light flames appeared. As one stared at the odd looking flame, they could feel their life force being drawn toward the darkest reaches of the flame.
After sometime of sitting with Kyle hugging her she now noticed he had fallen asleep. She was now at a total loss of what to do since she never found out his last name nor his where his parents are. She soon gave up and decided to bring the boy to the receptionist and ask her to find the boy's parents and then gave him to them.
"Where did you get meat?" Ayne inquired.
"MISTRESS!!" Sakuya joining in.
Picking up her brush and dipping it in ink, Yujia wrote, "The first painting encases the liveliness of the bull, proving that a painter who had dedicated much of his life focusing on bulls created it, and therefore makes the painter a master. The second painting, although pretty on the outside, serves no other purpose than being just pretty. The artist did not manage to capture any emotions or value within their painting, making it virtually worthless and no different than a sheet of blank paper. It is the work of a beginner. And despite the fact that the third painting resembles something sloppy and put together in a brief moment of time, it manages to encase intense emotions of outrage within its hidden detail. The painting is from a master."
"Fufufu, I understand your fear dear Fran but no need to worry. Though 'Support' is a unique element, it's within the common elements as well. Many priest, adventurers, and even commoners possess it. Also, if there was a time where the kingdom will hunt you, I'll make sure to stop them." (Rose)
a useless review for this exp seeker hahahahahaha 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140
Jewel however still seemed to be frozen in place as she was overwhelmed by a myriad of emotions hearing the last words of her parents. Feeling somewhat lost she turned and buried herself in Brolys fit yet child sized chest as she found her center. Wrapping his arms around her Broly remained silent as he tenderly stroked Jewels head with his right hand instilling both comfort and security in the somewhat shaken young Saiyan girl.
Because of these two ridiculous people, Sara was able to forget, at least for the moment, that her heart was a shredded broken little thing.
Honestly liking a lot so far. Hope the author continues with it. ?❤️
@chapter 1 i can already feel that mc is a dog,not worth my,if you guys dont't like loser MC's like this better not waste your time reading this
Reviewing after I've read to chapter 236.The novel has an interesting premise: the MC can cultivate in a different world in his dreams, and can transfer skills and objects between worlds at the cost of depleting his soul energy. In the real world, he starts off as a poor fisherman dealing with an oppressive gang, then as he gains in cultivation, he has to resist more powerful cultivators and sects that want to steal his resources. Due to the time difference in his dreams vs the real world, he amasses more cultivation, power, influence, and knowledge in the other worlds (say thousands of years there vs decades in the real world), and uses his resources there to increase his cultivation in the real world.Pros:- there's a true sense of mystery in the real world: we don't learn anything unless the MC does, and as a rogue cultivator, he only slowly gains in knowledge even after his power level is impressive.- interesting key ability that drives his growth- he doesn't become OP in the real world very fast, instead has stable growth and there's a realistic sense of risk as he tries to grow without being noticed by cultivation sectsCons:- the pacing is slow- the systems he's cultivating don't really make much sense, are overly intricate, and the author spends way too much time going over their details instead of moving the plot forward- it's not unusual to have chapters that are nothing but info-dump on details that don't really matter and are confusing- the MC has no motivations or interests beyond becoming a stronger cultivator- the characters, including the MC, lack depth- the MC has no real meaningful relationships with other peopleIt's a fun enough read-- to experience his growth in strength and knowledge of the cultivation world in the real world-- that I am continuing to read it. But it's so slow moving that I stack up chapters and read them like 20 in a go, so that I can see some development. I think also the tendency of the author to spend chapter info-dumping rather than moving the plot forward is increasing over time.
