A young Genius who ushers in the era of Virtual Reality, especially his teams own ground breaking one of which they dominate it as #1 Guild but he drops dead after finishing a future update. His Journey begins when he finds out that he can continue living but in the game world he helped build to prevent the fated disaster which is the basis he designed.
Impeccable, the choice of words was splendid. I think the plot was what made this novel into something great. Sci-Fi was a difficult genre and with its quality based on your first book, then I must conclude that you are a talented one. Good luck in the future! I hope more readers will come and enjoy your work. ?
Not bad!Although story is slow it should be faster than this. Overall you can read it once not more than that. character development is not that fast characters aren't that interesting too.
MC will range from 1-5 years old throughout these chapters. I don't know if we'll have any more time skips but a little boy for an MC is a terrible choice. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------His birth family gave him a drop of Ancient Phoenix blood, sent him from the Highest God Realm to the Lowest Mortal Realm to hide away and grow stronger. ----------------------------------------------------------------His new adopted family is royalty. Mom is Empress Bing and dad is the King. His brother is the crown prince and sister is a genius. The Empress, King and Crown Prince were about to die when the void opened up, a baby came out and just by crying, he killed the pursuers--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------'xxxxxx----------After that, he was brought back to the kingdom. After his new parents discovered his abilities, Empress Bing faked her own death, took the boy and hide away in her clan, far away to protect the boy even more-------------------------'---------------------------------'------------------------------------------------------------------------------MC can talk at one. Just follow people around, annoyingly and has quite a bad mouth to everyone. He has an age ceremony at 5, awakens the fire attribute at the unknown rank. Of course, the Clan head says rank 1 to protect him........#----------------------------------- ---------------------#--##----------------------------##-#-MC has a future gf Nina from another clan. He was killed, but came back to life. He has to kill that evil Rose girl one day. Rose's older sister is Lily, a nice girl and was friends with MC. She didn't give up any info on Rose's whereabouts------------------------------------------------------------- ----------------#------------------------------------MC's family makes Lily his new slave for life, ssigning a soul pact. The BS part is that her cultivation jumps two realms instantly & she can also revive when she dies (if MC wants it). MC got no powerup. MC is still just 5, but a very arrogant person and very perverse, the exact opposite of what you usually see from a so called Phoenix Bloodline.
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So much fun, Recommended! Recommended! Recommended! Recommended! Recommended! Recommended! Recommended! Recommended! Recommended! Recommended! Recommended! Recommended! Recommended! Recommended! Recommended!
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Although I'm only reviewing this at eight chapters, I have to say that your novel is great. The writing quality is a full on five as is the stability of updates. I love the plot and especially that even when your novel is about zombies, the people around the female lead are pretty realistic in their reactions.
I don't know if this novel is contracted with the original work from the comic version or just some guys found the original novel version and translated it, but you guys can check the novel version, it's great.
I'm very confused ,not to be alarmed ,the story is actually nice but it's very confusing to me .How did someone who was betrayed by his best friend,lover,mentor that he had known for like 5 to 10 years suddenly trust someone that he just met that day with his secrets . I'm confused......it looked to forced.
I’ve only read the first 50 chapters but I enjoy the story so far. I got annoyed at some of the character interactions, for example: I don’t like talking to kids like they are stupid, but it didn’t ruin the story. I feel as though it has gotten better the more I have read and I was tempted to drop at first but am glad I gave it a chance.
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