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After a looooooong looooooooong time, i finally found a worthy cultivation novel. Please dont drop the novel and MORE CHAPTERS. Great world building and finally a mc who does not have any type of advantge,and is just aware of his position, and is just trying everything to stay afloat. Grammar’s good and the story is building up for something nice
the 1st half of the novel was good but I don't know what happened afterwards because author focuses on making has many fillers chapters has possible and entire chapter can be summarised in to 2 line. author is doing everything possible to squeeze has much money from his paid readers
This was the first truly great web novel that I ever read. An essential must-read for veterans and newcomers alike. And at the end if it all, it will leave you remembering the name Linley Baruch.5/5
Please next update as soon as possible, i waiting the next chapter.............................................................................................
It is just the backbone which would make the story and not realley a novel for me.It has a lot of intresting ideas.It is not fleshed out.
Hey there, Im here just for the XP so dont mind me. ? Hey there, Im here just for the XP so dont mind me. ? Hey there, Im here just for the XP so dont mind me. ? Hey there, Im here just for the XP so dont mind me. ?
An overarching plot that give solo levelling vibes albeit mc has dark back story but a completely engrossing one to see how he's able to negotiate his new system after his heartache. Will be interesting to follow the progress of the mc. Goidluck author.
I Love the idé that all monsters and animals koms from eggs and that they evolv to bad we wont see any more of this story ?. I just somone will be kind and kontinuye this story it was great reading!?!?
I liked this novel, I don't understand why qidan stoped the other translation groups from working on it, if they won't ...for the novel(as far as Ive read) it's progress is slow but quite steady, the mc makes a bunch of mistakes that make sense for a kid of his age. Its just that the author neglects other characters and their development but I guess from the stories progress they won't have as much of an impact in the future.
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This novel is good.Sure,it might not have good grammar and the story sometimes not making sense it still is awesome.A whole 112 chapters are free and the main charater is strong but not too strong.All in all i would recommend this novel! ?
