this was indeed said and it sums my thoughts too about your book: I don't agree with those who commented before me. Why is the novel confusing? Why is it a mess?Maybe it is if you read a novel for preschoolers your whole life your brain cells die over time. I don't know, I just speculating. But it's a fact that if you don't use it you lose it. Maybe some ppl lost it.Anyway, this novel is simple. It's a sci-fi-type novel of intergalactic beings. A world with a very high level of technology.The protagonist was indeed sent back in time a week before the start of an intergalactic game that opens for menkind. This game seems to be the hope for the future of humanity and his beloved sister. He takes his knowledge from the future and makes the most out of it. What is interesting is that he does not have 100% of his memory and sometimes unforeseen things happen.Now my review.I like the story actually the author said it starts slow but to me, it's full of things that make me curious and it's not slow at all. for me slow is when a story is annoyingly boring, when nothing actually happens. The story is not a fighting everybody every second type of novel. which I like.90% of the story so far happens inside the game. But I know there is a world outside the game the author has not really touched upon yet.Now, this seems to also be a cultivation novel??? So I don't see where that is going to fit well in a sci-fi gaming environment that is my only concern about this novel because now everything is about stats and happens inside the game. So will it all turn onto the dao? Immortals? Flying on a sword and searching for the pinnacle of life? Going against the heavens? IDK? I have not gone too far yet for me to know that. I hope It does not become a Chinese face slapping showdown.
As of chapter 14 (newest at this point in time)I am in love with this book! Although I will be sad when this goes premium. I love the idea, especially how the mc is a npc (not really because he is alive but to the players he is an NPC) It is a really nice take on how npcs view the players. I am super sad that only 2 chapters come out a day and not the whole book but their is nothing I can do about it. It is also a lot better than this being a dropped book. If that did happen I would die of book withdrawal. Luckily we don’t need to worry about that as this is a paid book and has over 500 non translated chapters. How much do you think Webnovels translators get paid?
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I've read what's available, and honestly I really like it. reader The TL is solid, the pace is good, the characters are all distinct, and the world-building is quite decent too. welldoneThe MC isn't the highlight of this story- he plays a central role, certainly, but this novel focuses a lot on his 'human tools', and it's all the better for it. The pace could be improved a little - Chen Qianxue's segments of the story are already getting a bit dull, but the introduction of the new character makes it more palpatable.The concept this is about plays out really well, and I can't wait to see where it goes. More twists will have to be introduced so it doesn't get too stale, so this might fall off after ~150ish chapters, but the 40 here are solid. ehhThe comedy is done nicely, as is the relationship between the characters, though very little of that currently exists. The dialogue is written well, most events seem reasonable and logical, and I'm really curious to see how this goes forward.All in all, I'd say this is a solid 7/10 currently. It's not ground-breaking, but it's a fun read and easy to get into, and it has a lot of potential for the future. bow
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I feel my brain rotting from reading this, I understand autht tries to make the start dramatic with the suicidal girl, but seriously it is a stupid reason and is as complex as ugly guy takes pics of girl so now time to die. If she is gonna end self anyway just kill guy with the pics I read till chap4
Honestly quite an entertaining novel, but it's completely ruined by the fact that the TL has absolutely no communication with the reader base and has no idea how to actually upload chapters in order (or even the right chapters in some cases).This is a great example of a fun novel being ruined by a completely oblivious TL (assuming the TL is even a real person).I've scored down the Story development due to the wrong chapters being uploaded all the time and completely ruining the story's continuity.
This novel is about a teenager living in a world of cultivation that has grown to have a similar society as the real world. The mc's parents are normal people without much cultivation while the mc has the most op body in this world. His father is a very popular web novel author who strangely has many fans among the top cultivators of the world (I personally suspect that the high level cultivators after reading a satisfying chapter subconsciously 'bless' the author and his family and after many chapters and blessings an op son is born). The mc is so op that he's a danger to society. His soul is too strong for most formations and machines so they break all the time and his body is so strong that the backlash from accidentally bumping into the mc will likely kill most people. The mc rarely talks and that creates it's own problems and despite the mc knowing that they misunderstood, because he can read people's mind, he never corrects them. This story is meant to be a comedy story but most of the comedy feels forced. And of course some jokes are funny but there are also a lot of misses. And this is made even more clear because the mc does not really has a goal in life (except of course trying to not stand out). The mc is boring and the author throws all kinds of writing techniques to liven up the story but that is very hard with an mc who does everything to make it seem like he has nothing to do with it. In a way the humor is similar to Library of Heavens Path but since the mc does not participate it is not as funny. The villains are not much better either but that has more to do with that they all follow a similar process. First they are out doing bad things, they get interrupted by mc by accident, they want to battle/take revenge with mc, they get killed or mc is mistaken as a different person and villain starts worshipping mc. So in summary the story development is not very good because mc is too op and has no goals in live so as a reader I have no clue about where the story is going but then again that bit of uncertainty might be the best part of the story too
The story is ok so far if bored but I'm not at the point where I would spend coin on but it's getting better on chapter 60 so far the main characters are op as hell so be ready lol
Totally impressed by the novel,new chapters PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE ?? ???????????????????????????????????????
Just started reading it today and already read all the 41 chapters available. Really good character building and you just don't get tired of reading it. From now on, it will get a stone of mine everyday. Keep up the good work.