Its pretty nice story and good character and will worth your time for a read so do check it out for your self cuz there is a lot of negative reviews on it give it a try you won't regret.
So I actually finished all 51 chapters. It actually was pretty good in terms of mannerisms and writing quality from what I've read so far, but my main gripes are with some plot points. Characters are memorable, interactions were great, and the style of being set in Xuanxia setting was near perfect. Here are the problems I found when reading.1. Firstly, the mc commits suicide right on wedding day when he clearly enjoyed the girl's appearance and mannerisms. I found this rather ridiculous because after his soul returns to his body, he literally warms up to her simply because she didn't view him as a boy toy. The reasons as to why miss Yun even has such strong feelings for him, other than his looks, was never explained. I just found this plot point to be much too ridiculous. His relationship with servant girl made sense and is plausible, but he could literally know his wife more during the marriage rather than just suicide. I found it to be rather rash and stupid when the main character is clearly an intelligent genius.2. The white deer arc started and ended just as quick before we see the MC into a new area. I personally didn't like having his soul jump around so much before one plot point is finished, because it seems really messy and doesn't connect too well. Perhaps the story is still too early to know the reasonings for this, but after introducing a memorable character with likeable motives and personality, then sudden hopping to a different setting, felt really turning off for me.3. I don't think the character's powers were explained too well in terms of execution. So far, I know he has some sort of "soul power?" that allows him to face off against cultivators, but aside from that there's nothing else that's talked about more. MC seems to rely on this more than thinking of other ways to fight, and I suppose there's no other choice presently because he can't cultivate, but I think the polishing needs to be made so it's easier to diffrentiate what powers does the MC have. Tldr, It's well written and I'm glad most cliches were avoided. However, there's still things that require better execution in terms of plot. The setting, characters, and interactions are strong, but in terms of plot there's stuff that seems awkward to read at the moment. Also recommend changing your title since your MC truly did "die" and came back to life, because this story doesn't fit with a "Dark Age" theme.
First there was ‘I Can Track Everything’, now there’s this. Next week’s trial read, there’s probably gonna be another book with a treasure tracking ability...
There are so many plot holes in the story, the story development is good but I think 2 stars is enough.########## ############____________ _____________....... ....... ....... ............... ....... ....... ............. ..... ..... .......... ... .... .......... ..... ...... ........................ .................. ....... | | ....... ####### _______________ ---------
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Okay let me just get this out first, I am a sucker for post apocalyptic, zombies, and rebirth novels, and especially if they have a comedy tag.Speak no more, I am a simple man and you had me at apocalypse.... also thanks for letting me know about this story.With that out of the way, let's get to the story, instead of generic 1 time rebirth, this one decides to give us 100!!100x Rebirth = 100x ExpectationsI expect to see epic clairvoyance-like moments, and you too, whoever is reading this comment, I bet the MC also expected you reading this.
In case you're wondering, there are people who are interested in this novel, and I was quite put out that you might be discontinuing this novel, and I hope you don't, and I just don't want you to go down the road of discontinuing the novel because it's quite well written, and I just voted, and I'm pretty sure the 'men of culture' would hate to see you stop this novel ;) ;)
It is a very good novel, i rceally liked it and i hope thata there will be more thousands chapters ?? I hope that the story will continue to be more and more interesting ?
Translation Quality:Some sentences are hard to read because of how they are translated.Stability of Updates:This is one star as I haven't seen how often they will update this story when it goes live.Story Development:The story is developing at a decent quality but the pace seems a bit rushed at times.Character Design: Very few characters are original and the ones that are all seem to be lacking a quality that makes them human.World Background:We all know Warcraft's world background and the author makes a good go at using said background, I would like to know how the author intends to make it their own before I can increase the score.
Typical monster MC not wanting to hurt any humans because apparently he was a loser in his past life and he wants to gst some friends. Bullsh*t. I know there's two sides of a coin in this idea but I'm just f*cking tired of watching monster MC's be kind and risk their lives for some humans who they've just met and don't know their motives. Where is the supposed intelligrnce of this mc? I don't see it because he's just f*cking retarded.
5 stars for the tags ..i just can't resist giving 5 stars after looking those tags.........................................................
The world and the arcs as of ch83 are descriptive and well built. The story pacing is okay. But my main problem is that the Mc for a genius has a brain that isn't functioning most of the time. This is mostly done to hinder the Mc development and standing and getting some suspense into the story. I have no problem with dumb Mc's, I am quite fond of Luffy(One Piece) after all, but I hate it when an author tries to sell me an idiot as a Genius. And he is seemingly only made an idiot to limit his op ability.