I read the first 130 chapters. But I have to give up. The premise was great. The first 20 chapters was good. But then it went more slice of life style and in one case took 12 chapters to advance 3 hours in the book. When I found my self scrolling through the chapter hoping for an interesting bit I realized there was other stories I could be reading. This story is great if you like slice of life and knowing what the side characters are doing day to day. But I came for the duplicating system.
Very good world building. But I am 100 chapter in and barely anything has happened. I have to drop it just cause of how slow paced it is. No one cares about all these side characters.
I'm at chap 100 and I really like the novel so far. The plot, the story background, the characters, everthing is quite good. However, there's a thing about the story that I really dislike which is the age of the characters. I mean... having an infant fighting a bunch of bad guys is not very realistic, at least physically. I get that author already explain that mages mature really quick, but I still find it quite absurd for little children 2-4 years old to have the capabilities to fight not just commoners but other mages too. You could just add more time skips and get the story to officially start when the MC is about at least 8 yo or so, fighting bad guys at 8 yo is already a very fa growth spurt for me. The fight scenes are actually pretty good if I ignore the age.
Almost perfect except stability of updates. There is none whatsoever. Will binge read this one after a year, if I still remember it by then. Nonetheless, wonderful story.
Loving the concept.When would there be chapters?#ANTICIPATION???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Very good novelExcellent MC mindsetI'm really looking foward for it.---------------------------------------------------------//-----------------------------------------------------------------------
That fight lasted as long as i thought it would.
An interesting stories for me to read. Deception being ruthless, scheming, psychology attack damn it worth to read this kind of stories. Hopefully u can write till the end.
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Here's your worst review, good job. The mc with his 160 IQ somehow managed to be a retard. The saving the little girl was so fucking cliche you might as well make him actually be a prince, better yet why not her a princess too? The way you write situation is very annoying too. Here's an example of what it feels like: "MC could run five miles." "No, actually MC could run 10 miles if he wanted to". It always sound like you're contradicting yourself jesus christ, just write it as it is.
Not your novel, honestly just off yourself. I don't understand why your parents just didn't have an abortion, you ended up a waste of air.Marvel Super Extraction is the actual novel.
Short review: Very fun setup with good characters and an interesting system.Long review: The writing is overall decent, but the author shifts around in tense too much to make it a natural read. The story development is excellent, with a good introduction and setting up the stakes from the very first chapter. The characters are very well developed, with distinct features, and their interaction feels natural. I'm not far enough to say a lot about the world-building, but it appears solid, and I'm interested in how the author is going to make the supernatural features fit into an Earth-like world.