I really like this novel. I was gonna give 5/5 but realized can't review with "I like it so it's good" type thing. The evolution is like a draw. the Mc gets 3 choices to choose from every few chapters.*Quality is alright but could be better. The author puts periods in front of mc talking instead of the normal ""*Updates alright.*5/7 story*not really any character design lol*not really any character design lol
I swear to god this is one is great. Reading it, with the over the top grammatical mistakes is making this so fun. I never read novels on web, but this one, I cant get my eyes off of it. Highly Recommended.
One cliché behind the other .. Клише ,ни чем не отличается от других его работ ,скукота ,не читайте это ,только время зря потеряете Грусть печаль
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Aside from the Main Character's RL background (in which I have a few conjectures on how it will play in the much later chapters like those who've read novels like evil dragon and shura's wrath of the same genre), the current plot setting is very well thought off and chapters consists of elements important for building up the MC and the scenarios relating for future chapters (unlike others that just make chapters to add as a fodder to keep up with word count which containing something that is completely obvious and wastes time and SS).For those who like VRMMO Novels, this is a gem in the dust that should be added in your "Must Read" lists.
good like very good story but it some has problems for example almost every male character is a default or just bad from what I've read so I give it a three star not for me sorry but great sorry just wish we had more male character that were not defaults or just bad guys nice story thro
Writing Quality: Minor grammar mistakes here and there but nothing too major. The only new novel I've read with proper sentence structure in quite some time.Story Development: The pace is good, a little hard to keep track of the timeline tho. As the story goes further, the MC is slowly getting involve in bigger and bigger mess.Character Design: The main character doesn't just kill blindly. He only kills when he knows there's little to no repercussions and have ingenious ways to solve the issues caused by the killings.Updating Stability:I have not much to say since I just picked it up. Hope it stays consistent tho.World Background:So far, it's centered on MC's academy but not much has been told. It is slowly moving into the kingdom the academy is in.
On chapter 411The story barelY moves forward beCause , firstly for some reason they spend 20 chapters having barely significant chAracters discussing how he’s gonna lose so bad even after seeing his abilities, what should take two paragraphs takes 6 whole chapters where basically nothing happens!!!Then theres the whole sign in system which just vanished. And for ome reason instead of taking care lf his enemies directly, which he could easily do its like he enjoys them insultjng himI was so happy about finding this book at the strt but this is just hella disappointing?
I really wanted to like this. I really did. I powered through the propaganda for the first dozen chapters and then I resorted to substituting out China with a fictional country name. Nothing worked. The story in itself is great, with a fine premise, interesting plot and a great cheat. The world is built very well from what I've seen so far, and in any other story, this would be enough for a 5 star. But not here. Almost every single chapter is has an entire few sentences dedicated to praising China in some way. The haphazardly added in propaganda shatters the flow of the story, breaks the immersion over it's massive iron knee and makes the story feel more like propaganda than most propaganda I've seen. It is actually ridiculous to the point of being a fundamental, unfixable problem. I can't do it. I tried to read it like this story tried to convince me that China is actually heaven, and both cases ended in failure. Really, I can't.this hurts me
very interesting story the plot is amazing, the protagonist's personality is great i really liked it and her development is amazing and this is the best for this world, the harem honestly very interesting I really liked the personality of the heroines
Is there any romance ?
This story is ****ed like how can mc allow one of the people who serve him to be raped and not fight back and don't do the whole he's stronger then me bull**** because there's no way that's true the mc has intent that Wich is supposed to be hard to get and let's not forget the 5 years of constant death battles to make him stronger it's a good story but there's some major bull**** about some of the things like what's the point of Alice if she just to get raped.