Very well written the story sucks you right into it and it is a original one Def a must read book and way to underrated one. Should have a lot more comments and power stones
overall a good start some places story seems rushed
I couldn't believe this. My main character wrote a bad review for his story. He only gave 5 star for Character Development. This Rabbink needs to shamelessly write the standard 5 stars review to balance the score. I promise never dropped this novel.
really good story and please author continue
When I'm reading the synopsis going to the other chapters I can say that this book is interesting. I love fantasy and I'm gonna recommend you to read this??Kudos author_??
I like this one................................................................................................................................
I am a new author l, and i really respect your dedication to comtinue uploading even though you have not gotten premium. The story is amazing btw. Keep it up hopefully u can get it to premium soon.
I came across the story a few months ago while browsing. So like any normal person, I decided to check it out. I'm glad that I did or I would have missed out on this. Happy that your back. Please stay!
Some people may like it but most of people especially old readers will hate it especially if they read other kingdom building novel.I suggest if you don't want to lose your brain cell then don't read it.other world has 0 background.IDK how the **** MC buy sword crossbow and guns in morden era? There are 0 info or interaction with other world ?Also how the fk a army which one trained less than 1 month beat a well trained army?MC/Author logic advance equipment I say BS. we all know Advance equipment only provide little advantage.But not that much to win especially in that eraMc is hypocrite.I hope this trash don't pick up because it will dropped within few months. Reading this novel is like reading a sammary.Background is suck.
I LIKE IT! IT HAS THE SAME AUTHOR TO MY FAVORITE NOVELS TOO. SO PLEASE PICK THIS ONE IT IS VERY INTERESTING.I LIKE IT! IT HAS THE SAME AUTHOR TO MY FAVORITE NOVELS TOO. SO PLEASE PICK THIS ONE IT IS VERY INTERESTING.I LIKE IT! IT HAS THE SAME AUTHOR TO MY FAVORITE NOVELS TOO. SO PLEASE PICK THIS ONE IT IS VERY INTERESTING.
the start ruined the whole thing ?................................................ . .
i guess another faloo novel that was gutted and bastardized. 1 star to all westernized novels...