"Thank you Miss Karacule." I said.
Thousand of armour clad cultivator were standing. Each one had different clothing to one another. Which showed they belonged to different powers. Some were of the same powers wearing the same clothes.
Su Shi couldn't help but nod to her grandfather. She has never experienced this much pain from using her eyes of the world. She can only think that the person is powerful to the extent that even cultivators from her world might not be a match for that person.
Eve and Ares failed the test, and move on. Walking toward another city, suddenly Eve steps halted.
The world setting is supposely 18-19 century Great Britain like country (Holy Titan Empire).They have places like Dublin(Dulin) Buckingham Palace (Hamilton Palace) Dartmoor(Darmoga).The novel aimed at young Chinese audience and I think the author only loosely adopt western customs when convenient. Many differences from western customs.Naming were sh*t.MC name is O' Neil Andrew Morisette. Name like O' Neill , O' Shere, O' Hara are basically surnames meaning "of Neill (descendant of Neill)" etc. For example Jack O' Hara = Jack who is a descendant of Hara (Eaghra).So the MC first name is "Of Neil" but actually he is not a descendant of Neil or something!He is from Morissette family so why use that name?And his nickname is Oscar which is a farcry from O' Neill in western culture. ( In Chinese name O Neil and Oscar are similar but this is a western style novel, so author should mind the details.)Similar is the case of Antonia. Author made her nickname Annie. But the short forms of Antonia which people use are Nia, Toni, Tonia, Tonya. Antonia meaning flower.Annie is known to be derived from Hebrew name Hannah meaning gracious.In short this is a story which author pretend to be high class with some flowery words but he didn't even know the meanings of his own work.It is sad to read.The story is ******, People love MC, worship evenMC sleep with a random characterHaters try to kill or frame or oppress MCMC win over themAnd then the author explain for 1 chapter, why is this happening, why MC is winning every time, why every haters lose and why people worship MC.Author said MC is in prison since he is 5 years old. And I don't understand why ruthless,coldblooded and scheming inmates fear and worship him .May be I will read more of this when I am extra bore again.
i highly recommended this novel.keep it up
I wanted to like this novel, and I love the premise, but the MC is too much, he has less character than a snail, less intelligence than a new born bird, less creativity than a vegetative patient, less ambition than a dead frog. He is literally god, yet can't do anything. His powers are wasted on him, and he is too worried on being humanity's saviour with his hero complex than actually working towards his goals, growth or his mission. Thew author is so against edgy MCs he even have the MC say he didn't want to be like the novel's MC which is fine, but instead of doing that, he goes all the way to the other side and become a sucker, he is more worried about improving others lives than enjoying his own life and it gets boring to read him waste his time and abilities thinking how to make philanthropy instead of advancing his cause. With his powers the only thing stopping him of conquering the world in one day and winning the game, is the time it takes for his troops to march, yet, do nothing in his two acres plot not even improve the construction of facilities in his land after the first day.-
It's very decent, The amount of work done, The Effort and the Context of this Book, It is highly recommended to be read, It creates a whole new world of our planet.
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this is a Pretty well written piece I liked chapter 1 it did do a good job and was interesting to read their were some weak points but overall I give it a 7.5 out of 10 good intro am Looking forward to reading more.
A good attempt at novel with Indian history. It leaves much to be desired( beware I am comparing with some of the very good novels on this app) but none the less an entertaining one. I would have loved it more if it was more detailed with clear show of hardship rather then a smooth sailing in start. Anyways good luck for your novel I appreciate the effort of more Indian content.
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