I love this kind of novel, I wait for it to turn into a 100 kilometer snake so that it can swallow a planet, I am so excited , I hope it will be chosen √√√√√√√ √
Synopsis sounded fun, but the execution is extremely poor. Could get better later in, but didn't make it past the first 10~ or so. There is no plot development, at one point someone dislikes the main character, then the next they're out on a date with no mention of why or how it got to that point. And when it appeared as if there would finally be some movement, with the MC needing to explain himself, author skips right past it and has MC replace people's memory. The entire story so far is just the main character and his family being inexplicably awkward with events happening that have no build up or even reason to occur.
This is the beginning of a great harem novel with an interesting system. Hopefully, the author can return and give us more.
The Writing Quality is good but can be improved ( not that i am an expert :P ) the Story development is going fast for now which i like and the world background is also unique as there are also monster with intelligent life and have their own way to live just like humans.The Characters are swords as you can see from the title which is unique imo.Good luck in your journey Author. xD
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Too much time skip and battles are not detailed or the mechs. The imagery is weak, and half the time I don't even know where I am in the novel as well; it's too fast and the strength mc gains is so insignificant because of that. This is the first time I ever did a review, and I did this review because the novel's story is pretty crap. Character (especially Mu Shang)and world design are alright though.
Y DOESNT JUST ABOUT EVERYONE PUT BUTTERFLYS IN HERE?? THEY SUCK REPLACE IT WITH A FOX AND THE CROW REALLY?? Y BOTH OF THESE R STUPID PUT SOMETHING ELSE IN!!
they'll probably adapt it into a manwha first
The supermarket scene is such a perfect microcosm of everything going on here. You've got the rich kids casually shopping without looking at prices, Cheng Yu standing in front of instant noodles like his entire financial world has collapsed, and Sang Ji just casually offering to let them join her group for dinner like it's nothing. The contrast between the street-side supermarket with its "seaside charm" decorations and the later mention of Lanjing Hotel—tens of thousands per night, top political and business elites only, you need connections just to get in—creates this whole layered sense of class that the author doesn't even have to explicitly state. And then there's the vacation house itself: six-seater dining table that's "slightly cramped for seven people." Seven. Of course it is. Every group dynamic in this show seems to revolve around forced proximity and uncomfortable seating arrangements. The live stream comments about Jiang Siwei and Jiang Rui eating boxed meals while everyone else feasts? That's worldbuilding through audience reaction, which is honestly genius. You get the sense of a whole ecosystem—celebrities, staff, punished cast members, watching audiences—all existing in different tiers of this island paradise.
Better, than before!
the only criticism I have is to do with spelling and continuity... eg. Hana or Hanna. Suzu or Zuzu, other than that, I'm really enjoying this book.
I'm only up the the 9th chapter and i can't stop rereading from the beginning of it