I read some reviews that liken this to Lord of the Mysteries (LoM). It does have hints of mysteries and a solid world building. But other than that, this is mainly a city building novel (at least up to Chapter 60). Instead of the MC making progress improving his level, it's all about opening wastelands and trying to make a thriving city out of a wild territory. Based on the current setup, the story does have the potential to branch out later.First Impression:In the opening chapters, there were literally three main female (plus one female side) characters being introduced. Normally, when I see that many females, my harem alarm goes off. Fortunately, it's apparent that that's not the case based on their interactions. Otherwise, it would be incest considering that two of them were the MC's n+1 great-granddaughters. Characters:The main character took over the body of Gawain Cecil and became the clan ancestor coming back to life. He's not OP, but he has the prestige of Gawain Cecil, who was the founding hero of the nation. Asides from the King and some nobles, he literally ranks the highest, which means that he automatically gains awe, fear and respect from people (unlike Klein Moretti from LoM, who basically has to work his way up). Gawain has an easy going manner. He's a transmigrator after all. So, he doesn't act old-fashioned like one would expect of an ancestor from the past. Towards his n+1 great-granddaughters, he behaved more like their colleagues. In fact, he's more liberal than anyone in the nation. He's rational and is a planner. So far, I haven't gotten annoyed by him. But I am annoyed with the female side characters, some more than others. Literally, all of them are so weak right now. They might get stronger later on, but right now, Gawain has to carry most of the load. (When Klein first started, all of his teammates are stronger than him. This is the complete opposite of that.)Rebecca: The current Viscountess of Cecil. She's young and naive. And so far, only knows how to cast one spell, fireball. I don't think she's dumb, just one who hasn't seen much of the world. Once she starts to mature, I think we'll see some growth. Herti: Rebecca's aunt. She's stronger and more serious. But all of her spells has like 99% chance of missing the target. Still, I quite like her seriousness and responsible attitude. Amber: the half-elf thief who possibly 'woke up' Gawain from his coffin. Many readers seem to really like her. She might even end up as a potential love interest for the MC? But she really gets on my nerve. She has an overly spunky attitude, which I normally like, but she mouths off at everything. Literally, if she can't get her opinion in about everything every time she shows up, she's not satisfied. Her appearance is meant for comedic relief but just ends up being really annoying. I skipped most of her dialogues cause they add almost no value to the story (except to want to let Rebecca throw fireball at her face). Betty: Rebecca's maid. Now, she is dumb. She annoys me even more than Amber. Fortunately, she has very few scenes. I don't know why Rebecca keeps sending her to report her work progress to Gawain. Because every time he asks what Rebecca wants, she just says 'I forgot'.Yep, that's the current setup. There's some knight characters that might potentially play some decent role. But right now, it's too early to tell since they have too few scenes. There's also mysteries behind MC gaining possession of the body and the reason why he hung on the sky for like a millennia. Even the original Gawain Cecil didn't seem like he's just a simple hero. Overall: Somewhat worth checking out if you appreciate a rational MC who doesn't think with his lower half, a good world building, and mysteries. And of course, lots of city building and logistic talks. Just know that the MC is currently stuck with pig teammates right now, who hopefully will improve. No indication of harem so far. A plus.
I like the characters in the story, but I feel the grammar could seriously use some work. Comparing the latest chapter to the first chapter, the authors grammar already improved so I'd go back and fix the first few chapters. Maybe incorporate an outline and also increase the pacing... I'd also work more on the descriptions of battles, but overall I liked what I saw besides the mistakes...
Good book but the childish comedy ruined it for me couldt make it pass 20 chaps jokes were cringe af and not funny.....................
This book is so good I can’t wait tell the next chapter comes out and I hope u make another book that is a sequel to this 1 or other book like this 1
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To be honest, the story has a lot potential. Although the theme apocalypse and the second chance is very widely used, but I think the writer did a good job here. Unlike other apocalypse stories. The author here clearly makes mc OP from the beginning, but it does not make you bore, because in the usual apocalypse story, the mc usually has to suffer, gain strength slowly, and meet problems constantly and continue to grow until it reaches the top. Well, I don't know about others, but I'm sick of it. So I hope this story can be entertaining.
this story, but I have no idea why it stopped at 114th chapter . Did the author drop it? will this continue to update? I sincerely hope this novel gets more chapters while maintaining its quality thus far
Was this dropped, or just on hiatus?
A really nice story so far! The characters are interesting to read about, and the world is drip fed enough for me to really enjoy it. My ONLY criticism is I feel characters and monsters could be visually described a lot better. Really looking forward to reading more!
Finished the chapters currently available and like it, its comical most of the time but their is development to a more serious storyline, or at least there was, idk how it will turn out but I find it good mainly because of its comical aspect.
I know I didn't give 5-stars, but this is still a 10/10 I would recommend novel.