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It is a great book with a lot of action and character development. If you are looking for a book that will send you to one world after another and keep the action going with interesting characters then this is the book for you.
Author when will you release the latest it's already been a month..this is just the cup of my tea novel and i dont have anything to read yet..so please release a chapter alredy..Sincerely yours,#1#2#3 Abid Reader
I'm about to do what's called a pro gamer move *laughs evilly*Okay but seriously, this is my first novel and I'm still inexperienced if you have any advice or critics(good or bad) feel free to tell. Thanks in advance
love it so far ive read up to chap 19 and can see it being a very entertaining story to read. granted you would need to like this stereotype of novel
So far, so good. I can say it seems to be fairly standard as litrpg goes. It's one of those regressor types where the MC was a top pro player and then starts over again with a new character. I do like the way the author keeps the mystery of the MC's real life going..revealing it bits at a time. Though the focus is mainly on the game world...I can already tell there is going be a huge blow up with real life that will probably cross over the game world as well.
If only chapters would increase then I would read it don't mind the rating its just exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
I'm absolutely addicted to this ongoing WebNovel! The author's writing is so descriptive that I feel like I'm right there in the story with the characters. The world-building is so well-crafted and the characters are so relatable that I'm emotionally invested in their journeys. I can't wait to see how this story ends and I highly recommend it to anyone who loves an ongoing read!
It’s pretty good ?. But one question… golden immortal and others are not in that rank page. Soo… maybe an update on that. Thanks
I tried to finish this novel, made it to chapter 270ish. Despite the writing level being that of a drink middle school student at the start, it seemed to have an interesting enough premise, and potential.It failed to live up to any of that. World building was haphazard in those places it did exist. Comparable power levels shifted to fit whatever the author needed to happen at that time. Character personality and background morph with little regard for what's gone before. There is little to no structure, characters show up, randomly interacting with extreme familial intimacy, that have LITERALLY NEVER BEEN MENTIONED BEFORE!!The system is hauled out doing stuff that just needs to be done, but seems to ignore its own rules most of the time. It is also largely ignored except when the writer screws up and needs a hand wave solution.Do not read this book, almost anything is better, and I regret the money I spent unlimited cling chapters because I gate to not finish something I started, regardless of how bad it is. This book however has made me break that trend . I'm only 20 chapters from the end, but I just can't go on.On top of everything else the author needs a serious proof reader as he constantly gender bends his pronouns, mixes up names of who he is referring too, contradicts what he said a paragraph before, and twists idioms to inadvertently reverse their meaning.He also seems to have a fixation with people finding 10-12 year Olds as sexual/romantic/r*pe targets, or implying that someone had kids, at 13, after years of abuse, as if that age was "standard". (23 year old (which he considers mud 20s) with a 10 year old daughter for example). This extends as low as it seemingly being "normal" for the 8 year old twin sister of one character, to have been trading sexual favours to folks for a living.
One of the best novels on this site. MC is intelligent, humorous and good at strategies. The side characters like the other elders from the sect are well developed, and world building is excellent. One caveat is that MC’s cultivation is slow and this can make readers impatient. From my perspective, having this aspect is great compared to many other novels where MC upgrades super-fast relying on random lucky encounters.
The author constantly forget what he wrote in the previous chapter/ paragraph/ sentence. Which is almost hilarious, if the writing wasn't so bad. Also, it's a cultivation novel because the Chinese are physically incapable of writing anything else
typical cultivation novel but wowww it doesn't have the same annoying tropes as the rest and is actually a good story, IMPOSSIBLE!
