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Very well written and has great story development. The wording is so smooth and intricate. The plot was very interesting, I like a strong lead female. Great job by the author
Typical sign in get rich fave slapping novel with few tweaks. MC is forcefully shown as dense for a supposed popular school/college hunk. Also MC has no dignity or self respect... The author's reasoning, and justification for the female characters' lack of respect for MC or even outright insulting him to the face and then later in story the MC brushing it off as if it isn't really a big deal is too simpy..
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You'll be losing out man!! This is an AWESOME book, believe it!!!!! Mc is helpful to other characters but still, it doesn't seem to overshadow his adventures.I love his powers too!! Can't think of anything other than his future love-interest situation that I don't like....Ps: plz! O plz! Don't make it a harem!!!
I love cliffhangers and thrills but from all the cliffhangers here, this one is the one I am most disappointed with. So disappointed. Very disappointed. If I could write the word DISAPPOINTED a thousand times then I would but that's pointless. ?There's no question with regards to their mission but hanging the storyline there...huh
Haven't read the novel yet, but the synopsis is one of the reason of dumb ways to die... hehehe. Enjoy!.................................?.......
Another great story in the making. I can't wait for more updates
The dialogue in these chapters is absolutely electric. Let me just quote a few lines because I can't contain myself: 'At least I contributed my body. Without my cooperation, how could there have been this banquet?' 'Do you even know how to use words properly? What you did was just showing up.' This is the kind of exchange that makes you laugh out loud and then immediately want to read more. Ying Sitong's voice is so distinct—she's playful, slightly chaotic, unapologetically herself, and she has this wonderful ability to say the most inappropriate things with complete sincerity. 'Your aunt's period has started' coming from a vampire who's been restraining herself from drinking her family's blood is peak comedy. And Xia Yuan's deadpan responses are perfectly calibrated. He's the straight man to her chaos, but he's not boring about it—his internal monologue is sharp and observant, and his external reactions are just dry enough to make her energy pop even more. The narrative voice itself is also really distinctive. It's close third person, mostly from Xia Yuan's perspective, and it has this wry, slightly exhausted tone that fits him perfectly. He's constantly documenting, analyzing, trying to maintain control while everything around him is increasingly out of control. The author's voice as narrator complements the characters without overshadowing them. Every line of dialogue feels like it's revealing character, not just advancing plot. Even the contract negotiations read like romantic comedy banter, which is a tone I didn't know I needed in my life.
Thoroughly enjoying this book. Well written, great read.
