Good book, very interesting and exciting plot. The author must have really put some effort into this book, and I hope he updates soon though, hehe. Anyways, it's a nice read.
I was intrigued by the premise, but, eh, delivery was kinda weak.It's clear that the author isn't too well versed in English at least in the early chapters. Hopefully writing this helped them get better.The flow is actually pretty good, but the 'conversational' tone the... narrator? takes is mildly annoying. It feels like it's trying to be funny/clever too hard, but ends up awkward.The characters feel a bit artificial, as if they are defined by a trope or cliche that is stuck to their forehead. I'm not saying that you won't find people like them in reality, but they feel like those homeschooled kids that can't read the mood.All in all, it's obvious that it's a beginner work and if you're fine with that then the premise shows a lot of promise. If there's ever a rewritten version of this that cleans things up, I'll give it another shot.
Great storyline and characters. The story is easy to understand and follow and I haven’t gotten bored of it in the slightest. Definitely recommend to friends or whoever is reading this.
MC is teleported to another world and acts like nothing happens while immediately propositioning a queen in the firat 5 chaoters. By the end of the 5th chapter he is handed literally infinite potential, even used the little infinity symbol, and god-like power by the end of the fifth chapter. I'm not sure exactly what there is left to read since the author just showed the MC will have absolutely nothing to work for and will just be handed power for no reason while he acts like some cool guy hitting on girls with lame lines.
fun novel with great attention to detail! the characters are lively and create a fun live environment not found everywhere I recommend everyone give this book a try!
I like the story ...and i hope there's more ingredients/ food to be made and known in this novel. Keep up the good development and don't be strayed by the plot/genre like other novel, because its disspointing
This isn't xianxia nor it is a western take of xianxia. This is more Avatar The Legend of Korra if people know what that means. It is still readable and enjoyable, but the story really has zero dignity and is full of western garbage.
Simple, Generic, Quite Fast, Action-packed, and Fun to read. Give it a try before you give it up. If you think it's boring because it seems like a copy, then keep an open mind. I promise it won't disappoint.
This novel is such garbage I had to give it another review since Qidian doesnt let us rate below 2/10.I’ve kept reading the MTL and just wow has ot gotten even worse. It’s become the shit where people try to kill the MC and the MC is like “virtue of life” yada yada and lets them go. What will happen because of this? Obviously more enemies will come.There is just stupid trial after stupid trial because everyone looks down on the MC and the MC wants to prove himself to face slap everyone just like China wants to do in its dreams.Pure garbage. I can’t think of a worse novel I’ve read in the past ten months. And I’ve read a lot of shit-tier novels on here.
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