It’s a good read and I personally like it.The blend of cultivation, necromancy, and rich world-building kept me hooked from start to finish. Lin Moyu's journey through mystical realms is captivating, making it hard to put down.
To lazy to explain oh well still will, mc is actually evil, anytime it looks like he’s going to fall in love or bullshit he won’t not a pussy fucking uses his brain op u got it dialog check yeah to tire rn but just give it a try a gem
I really like the way the author describes the story. From this story, we can learn many life lessons. I'm waiting for the sequel, Thor!! Fighting!
Soooooooo excited to finish this... I'm sure thiiiis is going to be a happyyyy ending... I love how they crafted the characters... I just wish it wasn't too cheesy at times....
I feel that this type of leveling system is really interesting. The subtle way that the author shows how the Mc living in a skill system world without too much distractment, it was only during the sleeping period that the system updates. Very interesting.
You really have a good story backgroud, but its a shame that you can't develop your story well.As far as ch 81, you keep dumping "information". I think this kind of writting style is way too boring. No real development of story, just excessive amount of information. Even if you skip the "history" or some "information" it wouldn't affect the other stories, so until ch 81, i just read 2-3 page, and skimming the other excessive BS.
The MC is frustrating as he is supposed to have been reincarnated but he has no maturity and despite being a badass in his previous life is a stuttering mess around women and just gets abused by them.The novel has major power balancing issues as a 7 year old can be considered a B class swordsman despite the fact that's considered a very high standard in the world and his father whom is considered talented and who has trained his whole life is also a B class swordsman. So overall this novel os alright if you go into it just wanting to read about a stereotypical overpowered MC who seems a lot like the MC from a 3rd rate isekai.
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Hey everyone, I'm the author of SPYP and I'm just making sure everyone knows the situation. I'm a complete beginner in terms of webnovel writing, so I'm not sure my abilities will be able to meet expectations but I appreciate any feedback and comments. Also my release schedule will probably be S,T,Th and bonus chapters if the feedback is good enough. Most importantly, I am a college student so I might not be able to upload some days, if that happens I will try to make up for it the next day. Thank you and I hope you enjoy the story!
eu amo esse estilo de novel.give more more pls god-god-god-god- 140 charcters god=dog=gold=lob=cook
i really loved but it needed more detalils like how did they engineered the brotherds and agave them powers how did they reseted maverick, and if maverick has nany friends and give some more eneral context plus they were too much grammar errors
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