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Love it Love it Love it!I wanna read more about Lyle and what he does next!Keep it up author-san!I kinda suck at writing reviews, so this will have to do :P
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I am filled with regret to inform you that it is the name of MCs....
great novel, to find a piece like this here is so rare
I've read up to Ch 27, so I'm basing my review on what I've read so far.Firstly, I want to say that I really enjoy this novel, it's so rare to read a sign-in novel with a female MC, so I was so happy to find this one! The setting is interesting and diverse, and the characters are good and have great dynamics.Now because I've read a lot of sign-in stories, there are some things I think this novel could do better. Sometimes I forget this is a sign-in novel at all, as the rewards aren't mentioned often and the system takes a backseat to the plot of the story. I consider this a problem, as no matter how good the story is I think the basis should be the system and how it impacts the story. I would love it if the rewards were mentioned more often. I know the author said they didn't want it to impact the plot and pacing too much, but I think the rewards of the system should have more impact on the plot. The system is supposed to be super intelligent, why doesn't it give her things she really needs (or might not know she needs) and then those rewards can play an integral part in the next little bit of the story? It doesn't matter how extravagant the rewards are as long as they're used properly by her and the plot.I also am surprised by her decision to start a charity right away rather than a big business that could increase her funds substantially and help fund her charity work.Otherwise, I really like the novel and I can't wait till the love interests are introduced!
Honestly, this is absolutely amazing!!!! ?
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Enjoyable read however, people may get turned off from the beginning. MC has problems with his slavery and mate pairing to an unlikeable character(not main FMC). This is only prominent within the first volume and even after 20 chapters from the start, it lessens a considerable amount and was quite tolerable. The mate idea so far is a subplot to many different characters and doesn't entirely effect MC's decision making. It is well worth it to push onto Vol 2 and 3.*For people who don't like her, she hasn't been the main focus nor frequently appearing in vol 2 and 3.* The story itself is well written and fight scenes are good. There is a lot of gore and dark elements in the story. World building is slowly built and explained through conversations. There's not much info dumping if any. Some POV changes but not much for people who don't like them still good providing other characters thoughts.Characters are good, some are unlikeable, and unredeemable while you have there counterparts. Variety of different characters and people actually die for their own choices and actions. There are consequences even for the MC. The MC himself is naïve and curious about the world considering his whole life has been in a coliseum. He makes mistakes and learns from them. A story of his journey and self discovery would definitely recommend, well deserved rating.
It's crap not sure why rating is so high... well i guess since author can delete bad reviews helps. It jumps from on thing to another too quick, mc stutters like a retard for no reason, anyway read if you iq is low you might like it.
This is the author's shameless review! If you guys find any mistakes, just comment on them and I'll fix it in a day. Thanks for reading! Also, if you guys have any questions, just reply to this post and I'll answer them as early as possible, I just won't reveal any spoilers.(Again, I know, it's the exact same as my brother's, I'm just too lazy to create a new one.)
I love this story I am really hoping that after you are doing well with the new and improved Apex system which I am a big fan of too, that you will give a update on this story too.