ParshantMorwal
This is definitely one of the better dungeon novels.It has a nice story so far. And the most important thing is that it definitely will last for sometime as long as the writer doesn't drop it.
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The author is, after reading some similar material, trying their hand at writing a story of their own. It is very interesting what concepts the author likes to borrow.That being said, I know that it's cool that they have borrowed ideas from the novels they have, are and will be reading and translating such as Eliza, EDCL (experimental... lich), NEET and etc.I praise the author for starting with the rough rock, that which I previously have mentioned in a comment, and working to make this a gem! I looking forward to working, reading, enjoying, being with the author every step of the away.It may seem a little bland at first but I believe the author can and is able to twist this previously precedents into their own unique twist and styleSincerely and yours truly,Sir. Tentacles Shrubs
but what a good novel, I like the development of the story, it does not advance neither slow nor fast, it advances at a normal pace, you look like a professional writer, how many levels will there be, will there be 1000 levels? every 100 levels is like a kingdom and when you reach level 1000 you will become a god? the MC will evolve from a skeleton to a zombie, then to a ghoul, then to a goblin, then to an ogre, then to a minor demon, then to a greater demon and then to a supreme demon that has a human appearance and is hermono and has long hair and is it man?
Overall, the quality of the first half of the currently released chapters have been bad. Holding my interest for the first 4 chapters, the quality has dropped faster than a rock would sink in a pool of water. Quite unlikely that I will take it up again since I have finally started to develop eye fatigue or computer vision syndrome...
This is a very generic story with little to none creativity above the standard. Characters have little development with new ones that wouldn't even need to exist in the story
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its a certain drop if this novel turns out to be a harem type... why cant the males just choose one female companion? is that so hard? Greed cant be fulfilled until death comes..
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
An unexpected rough gem. While unspectacular, it is a cut above from other average series as it does not fall back to the usual tropes too much. Yes, some aspects might be familiar but the author took the pains to write in a roundabout manner and in different events that are somewhat unusual when compared to other similar titles. The pacing is not as slow as Mo Tian jI (Demon’s Diary).The plot events differ than the usual, it can be be a ride to see the ups and downs of the main character instead of the usual smooth sailing of other stories where the MC clear every hurdle after a fortuitous encounter. The MC depends mostly on himself and then benefited from his actions that rippled elsewhere in the setting. Hard work and persistence, no real shortcuts. Even his talent, we are told; comes with drawbacks.As for the MC himself, one would say he’s pretty bland. A typical righteous person, calm and decisive when needed. But like what others have noted, his ultimate goal seems to be be stronger for strength sake. There are some mysteries, but the reader aren’t told of any underlying plot driving his motivations. Give this a try, it’s a little different than most other storie
