Testing101

Mind blowing twist

Novel kinda mid, the author needs to get better                                                                           .............................................................................................

Not a bad rating just came here to say that couldn’t get past chapter one because the cringe and second hand embarrassment.

overall the story is very well rounded, but I feel that a couple changes could make all the difference. What I feel are those changes are 1. the fight scenes should be longer ( not more descriptive, as in more back and forth) and 2. you should add pov's to other characters ( your choice on how long)

I am filled with regret to inform you that it is the name of MCs....

"Because your mind couldn't take so much absorption and changes at one time. It's incredible isn't it, normally the cells would be the one full and exhausted before the mind ever is but for you, its like your cells and dna would never be full" he said, I guess passing out is good?