I think this a good novel to continue on. Although it may be the similar concept as unrivalled god of alchemy it’s still undeniable has potential. I want to know if the author decides to continue this story if the male lead will Be so likeable and not some jerk who have so many suitors. He can be nice to all females yet should not go over the line and create harem. Wish to know how the story end. It was a great 11 chapters and wish there is more ?
That fight lasted as long as i thought it would.
Good and interesting story. Kept me reading till the end. Definitely worth a try, I don't usually read this genre but this is actually impressive.
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One of my best readers in a long time.I hope that the author never drops this novel.Hail hydra.
this novel is amazing i love everything about it and recommend this to anyone that is into cultivation/reincarnation type of novel after every chapter i read i just cant stop wanting more i just hope that the author doesnt drop it.
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very unique story, lying characters are amazingly written I hope for the best for the author, good luck on the novel keep up the good work, author!
Five stars in every category because I strive for that level of authorship. The Dao of Storytelling is my goal. I plan to update at least one chapter a day. I plan to upload more on my days off of work, but I want quality of quantity. The length of my chapters varies, but I will not post anything under 2,000 words.There are very few grammatical errors and hopefully no misspellings. Paragraph comments with corrections are welcome. The development isn't the typical fast cultivation road. I plan to write more detail and hopefully bring my characters to life in the story. First, though, there is an R-18 and Polgamy tag. Those are just elements that make up the whole story. Not a harem seeker or a sex-addicted MC. No underage chicks and no legal lolis.The world background will become more expansive as the story evolves. Don't expect many info dumps as I like to tell the story instead of blatantly revealing the goal. I.e., "This is a kingdom-building journey" vs. " To return to the height of our ancestors, we will need an army."As for my MC, he has no cheats. He's born as a young master of a fallen clan. Yet, he maintains his maturity and the woes of his past life. He never wanted to reincarnate but comes to value his life and fights to succeed in his current life where he failed in the past.Well, that's it for now.
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Please continue writing. Please. I love your novel. I wanna read your novel. I wanna see you till the end of the novel. Please continue writing, please ???. Your novel is the greatest adventure out there.✌?✌?✌??
So far it is a good readSo far the MC is not stupid nor is he super smart but does stupid things.No super obvious plot armor or plot holes.