HeavenlyRascal
Okay so this batch is absolutely RIPPING. Let me just say it — the plot threads are tightening like a noose and I am HERE for it. Six years of buried secrets and the police are finally peeling back the layers. The skeletal remains in the cement? That's not just a body — that's a ticking time bomb of connections. The forensic details about the victim being 21-23 with possible intellectual disabilities? Chills. Absolute chills. Because it means someone vulnerable was killed and then HIDDEN, and the person who did it thought they could just pour concrete and walk away. But the real plot twist that had me gasping? Amin. The nightclub girl we thought we knew — the one with the bright red lips and the flashy smile — turns out to have been a completely different person six years ago. Innocent. Gentle. Wealthy. Naive. Wen Zhibang describes her like she's from another universe compared to the woman at Jinxiao Nightclub. And Li Heng? She pieces this together in ONE glance at a farewell photo. ONE. The woman is terrifyingly good at her job. The Liang Wei connection is the linchpin here. He disappeared around the same time as the victim, he was in love with Amin (or whatever she was called back then), and now we're finding out he might actually be ALIVE. His father is clinging to that hope like a lifeline. And the dinner that night — the one where Liang Wei ran after the girl and then drank himself into a stupor — that's the night everything went wrong. I need to know what happened at that dinner. Also Shen Zhicheng. Of COURSE he shows up at his own club opening surrounded by sycophants while the police are literally walking past him. And then Li Heng asks him a question that is SO clearly aimed at him — "is there any family's son — wealthy, but not quite right in the head?" — and he takes it as an insult. The dramatic irony is UNBEARABLE. He has no idea she's talking about someone in his world, and we the readers are SCREAMING at the page.
If I look at the hunger game fan fic .Now I know why there are no more chapters bcoz of this .This is tooooo goood.Kind of make it look realistic .Hope u can also start district 0 .
This over-arching dynamic between Ronan and Riven is very intriguing I hope it comes to a big climax at some point ? and overall very well written for the author's first attempt!! Loving it
love it, enjoy it, keep up the good work, you have a very good writing quality
A very interesting plot.... keep writing author
Amazing ?? and interesting highly recommend love it I added it to my library so as not to miss any updates
The novel "THE FEAR" is not just a horror story; it is a terrifying psychological experience that plays with the reader's mind. It blends elements of Gothic horror, cosmic horror, and terrifying hallucinations, making it one of the most disturbing and profound works in this literary genre."THE FEAR" is not an ordinary horror novel; it is a journey into the depths of human fear, where reality merges with nightmares, sanity with madness, and death with eternity. Through its Gothic atmosphere, psychological hallucinations, and cosmic entities, it offers a unique experience that goes beyond traditional horror, leaving the reader in a state of anxiety and unease long after finishing the chapter.
Hello guys sorry for the late reply. i was sick for few days.
Okay everything's good but don't forget the plot
Score:8/10Wont lie this book probably has the most innovative idea for the ‘Misunderstood Villain’ genre The writing quality is pretty good and the way the story is portrayed is very new. I am sure anyone who reads it will probably have their intrest piqued.The story of the villain being portrayed for the world to see, along with live coments from the audience is a very fun experience. The story tackles very real sentiments, where if someone is considered ‘evil’ then the their whole life is considered a cumulating of ‘evil deeds’.But at the same time ‘transmigration’ was not really needed in the story. It might be useful way far into the story but along the current chapters it is not needed. The supporting cast is also very intresting we have: transmigrator , reincarnated one and returner. Along with normal people. With the main aspect being either they hate the mc or they believe they were betrayed by him. The world is built along the movie. It’s a nice way to give details about the world and its inhabitants.But alas even after all the good points I probably won’t continue reading the book. Its really just a ‘me’ problem, which is I really don’t care about the past. Knowing what’s happening in the present. the past events don’t matter to me. I already know the end point of the story. I already know the big spoiler so I feel less intrested in the story with every chapter.Like sure it’s intresting how much efforts the mc is making to save Huda and Sinbad but I already know Huda reaches her uncle and Sinbad dies. Sure it would be intresting to know how it happned but I can just accept something bad happned and leave it at that. I don’t care about the romance if you already told me who the interests are at the beginning cause I already know what the end result is. Again it would be cool to know the details but I can live with ‘The Fl fell in love with the mc but felt she was betrayed when he broke her trust or killed their loved ones’. I already know they will hate him enough to reach this point, where is chained up, at the edge of death.And after all the story is told, there isn’t much that could happen: either the mc survives or he dies. Yeah sure it’s the journey that matters but you already showed me the ending and then started the journeyAgain as I said it’s probably a ‘me’ problem. I am probably being narrow minded and not seeing the bigger picture. And am probably being under appriciative of the art. I know the story wants me to see the life of a misunderstood hero.But I don’t want to make an effort to understand it. Hope this book finds success though, as I feel it brings something new to the table and is not just some generic copy paste story.
Welcome, my lovely fairies, to this book! (ノ´ヮ`)ノ*: ・゚✧This story has been with you for a while now, and seeing how much you love it makes me absolutely over the moon! (T▽T)♡You’re just like Selina’s best friends—worrying if she’ll get bullied, cheering for her when she fights back, and eagerly following her relationship with Logan. Honestly, it’s because of you that this story truly comes to life.(๑˃̵ᴗ˂̵)ﻭ♡ So, I promise to keep writing with all my heart and make this my best work yet. I want to give Selina, Logan, and all of you an unforgettable ending! (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧ ?
Hii , I’ve been meaning to write this but couldn’t for the past year , I hope you guys enjoy this as much I enjoy writing this
