The blue boy (Sal x Travis)

A very intriguing book and a must read

Had to give the author another review. Chapter 14 really hit me this is just not a typical kill zombies novel. It also deals with relationships on people, the way the author narrated that it is not a unique story that separation with time happens to everyone really got me. Good Job! I'll check on your work everyday!

To be honest, there are two things you need to fix. Firstly, the use of punctuation for some of the dialogues, it'd be better if you insert commas.Secondly, you always repeating the action but also including it in your dialogue e.g. He sighed. "Sigh..."In this situation, if you already wrote the character's action, you don't need to express it in the dialogue because readers could tell the character was sighing

awesome ????? .                                                                                                                           

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Erotic Scenes? I'M IN !!

it's pretty good so far read up to date as of December 15th 2022. I got it free read for the Christmas event. I like it so far. only issue is pay wall is at 29. not something I'd normally choose to read. but I havnt been disappointed yet by it. story is told nicely author seems to be active in his story. the Mc is well drawn out and original. the idk antagonist or second Mc (who knows at this point so no spoiler)in time was put in okay. not comment on what happens. world back ground is good. Mc seems original tho heavy influence of other works but author gives credit where credit is due and literature is ment to influence others and give ideas so no harm no foul in my opinion. Grammer seems good to at least decent. I'm no expert though but looks good to me. world back ground is taken care of nicely. story development...it's good so far honestly and I thought I should leave 3 dots there for dramatic effect lol. but that's about it. I recommend reading it if you got the coins or passes or win it like I did. that should about cover it all??