Hey!Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email soon.
First is writing quality. The writing quality of this novel is honestly not that good. There are many grammar and spelling errors, but the novel is still readable and you can still follow the flow, it's a 3.Stability of updates is a solid 5. The author updates every 2 days about, which is good, and consistent, but could be better.The story development is really slow in the beginning, you really have to get past the first 10 chapters for the pace to finally speed up, so it really was kind of a slug reading through the first 10 chapters. It's a solid 4, because afterwards, the story really picks up and gets good.The character design is okay. To be honest, everything is really generic, there really isn't any uniqueness yet, but that's what you expect from a novel in this genre. So a solid 4, as there are ways to make it unique, but that you just didn't do.Finally is the world background, the best part. There are many unique ideas in the world background, even though the frame was a little cliche. I was really surprised by the uniqueness some of the details brought, different from the generic feeling that the other parts of the story have. Definitely a well thought out world.Overall, a pretty average novel. If the chapters were edited or given a proofread, so that the writing quality was better, and the story development was a little faster, one that hooked the reader in, I would have definitely put this book on my recommended list.It's a good book author, with a good idea and a lot of potential. Continue your hard work!
even if u start changing the story at chapter 100 there is still 100 chapters that completely copied from the original no one is gonna w8 for u to copy and paste 100 chapters till u decide to change the story
I would have liked to say that this novel is too cliche, the story is repeated a 1000 times, etc for disliking this story.... but NO!This novel is just plain bad.
The storyline is quite unique and it immediately piqued my mind. Though generally I don't prefer this genre but this novel changed my views completely. The story development is also quite good and at pace.Keep your hard work on! Good luck!
A very well written story it maybe a bit generic and cliche but it definitely has a depth to it cant wait for more. All the best to the author for making this master piece
so far I enjoy it I actually really like the decision of trying to flesh out the world building first before getting more so into his individual development that you chose so far. Also really enjoy the fact that he found a companion early and the fact that this novel separates itself from other novels by making the main character a beastkin in the cultivation world. Keep up the good work I think it'll get the exposure it deserves eventually :) in all honesty I wish there was more chapters per week but I know that's not possible for every author considering you know, people have lives haha .
realistic world + math + good power scaling with no op mc fighting across realms. Scientific concepts are used well in this and this is pretty much how a mathematician would think. Also mc will become a formation user instead of cliche alchemy path.
Nice development nice background settings for this novel.....????????????????????????????????????Nice development nice background settings for this novel.....????????????????????????????????????
Tag List:Urban Fantasy, Action, Grim Reapers, Magic, Grimoire, Ghosts, Dead Souls, Demons, Spirits, Sages, Demi-humans, Hell, Different Realms, Major 1st person POV, MC with judgemental mentality and short temper, Gradual escalation of strength / Power, Non-system/cultivation magic mechanism.Romance = There is slight romance but it's not a major focus. It's barely hinted at in the initial 3 arcs and even after that, it's a very gradual sort of thing.Plot Pace = Not going to lie, it is a slow paced story but if you stick with it, I'm sire you'll have fun the whole time. I do add in humour and world exposition and character work to make that slow pace intresting.This is a planned story. While not every event is planned out, for now the plan is to have 10 arcs, each with around 30-40 chapters (40-50k words per arc). The first two arcs will be set in the real world but after that, the story will take place in other realms.Please like this review so that others can see the tags! Thank you ^_^
This book is basically a school life, pick up artist, system hunter gate novel. Hope you like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I would have never thought, that there would be a day in my lifetime in which a good novel was released on trial read. Yet here it is, this is an absolutely amazing novel, please do yourself a favor and read it