Everyone! Check this story, I know that it's only starting but still you won't regret reading it!☺ Its a gem everyone A GEM! And author?~? PLEASE UPDATE!??
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Followed the story when it was being translated on a different site. Well executed story with an interesting twist. As far as I read, the character doesn’t get too powerful relative to the world around him. This makes the story interesting because rather than your typical power fantasy he is usually still in a weaker position than whoever he fights against. This leads to the main character making clever decisions and taking interesting risks. Overall, the story is worthwhile to those tired of power fantasy and who want to read a low power wuxia story.
This story is really good. The development is well-paced. The FL is smart and strong. No self-deprecation and self-pity here. She knows what she wants and how to get what she wants. The ML is more like a side character next to her/him, but is still powerful enough to be a believable ML. Pick it up, and it will make you smile.
Attention. A lot of frustrations are waiting for you.So for up to near 300 chapters author basically tortures the protagonist. And the protagonist has almost no character development. His naivety, poor judgements of characters or situations has yet to show any improvements. I know you will argue with me here saying that he's still 16 years old, but I'm only saying this according to other characters in the story.
Author Update - I have looked at my previous chapters until 40, and I gotta admit that some parts were slightly amateurish and badly written, but chapters from 40 start getting better, I promise. I have written quite a lot of drafts, up to 70 chapter already and it keeps increasing and a lot of interesting things are happening in the life of Ichiro, even I, as a writer I am honestly surprised of the things I wrote and I think most of you will enjoy it, so please read at least up to 50, because a lot of interesting things start happening after it, and if you still don't like the novel, then you should prob it because this novel isn't probably for your taste then. Thanks for readind and I hope you will enjoy.
G'day mates! A new novel by Choas, so you know it will be good! Writing Quality: There have been very few errors in the currently released chapters. 4.9/5Stability of Updates: Tbd.Story Development: Seems interesting so far, and Choas's past stories have had interesting plots, so I'm looking forward to seeing how this one develops.Character Design: Just in the first few chapters, several interesting people have been introduced. Fey best girl?World Background: It seems to be a science/magic mixed world with monsters roaming the wilds, I hope to read more of Dax's adventures!
A very nice book, I feel sorry for those that aren't reading
when will you put out new chapters
the ad said it was a complete novel which is why I started reading it.
Love it!!! I’ve not lost interest for a moment can’t wait to finish it!!!