This is a very good work. I generally dont give review but this one deserves it. I can see a promising book that has potential to break record. Good job author.
what is felt from the start it is easy to read. nice language. and intrigue from very first chapter
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This book had me hooked from the start! The enigma surrounding the male lead keeps you intrigued, and just when you think the villain is about to meet his end, a big secret, which is the main plot, is revealed. The story is a captivating blend of magic, emotions, love, and intense fights. The friendships of both the male and female leads are portrayed beautifully, adding depth to the narrative.?✨
I read upto chapter 25. This novel is too dark and complex for my liking. This novel is the most confusing one that I have read in webnovel so far. You are bombarded with a lot of new names, powers, terms and abilities. The author tries to put out a lot of info about the supernatural yet all this information is useless.You have no idea about the MC ? how did he transmigrate? how did he become a child? what are records? what is the world setting? who is his family? who are his friends? ..........Nothing.......... The first 25 chapters are written beautifully but provides nothing of value . Readers are kept in the dark all the time . In the amidst of all this, the author keeps shifting his focus to unrelated people. Entire chapters are dedicated to people who we as readers have no idea about ( or care about) . Keep in mind, the author is trying to give attention to other people without giving due attention and importance to the MC himself. What a mess. I was frustrated a lot of times due to the apparent lack of info about the novel or the MC ( yet this novel is filled with useless information) . If you are looking for a relaxing novel ...... then keep away. This novel is not it.
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I have nothing to say ... More update more chapter plss dont drop this .. Actually good novel this . :).
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I think that this was ok but there were some parts where it could improve in.
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Writing was good. Concept of story and the way scenes were executed were also good. Nothing much to criticize, except for the story been very boring and plain. It's like eating nicely steamed and cooked bowl of plain rice everyday without any curry or side dishes.very boring.......