First of all the writing quality is pretty solid.
The updating stability need more time to be certain but at the moment it is great.
The story development feels great, it didn’t appear to be rushed or without planning.
The character design can be explored more deeply, but the story just started.
The world background is great, because it is our world.
A fun and unique read. No reincarnation, transmigration, past lives or other bs like that. Its a story about a smart kid who's the driving force behind his clans rise. The only thing slightly lacking atm (71 chapters) is a bit of world background to make sense of how skills and cultivation levels really work, but otherwise you won't be disappointed by this novel.
Writing, Stability, Story, Characters 5/5, World BG 4/5.
Don't read this novel, let alone read the unlocked chapters..
Because you will definitely regret it, because MC is 1000% slave of the system. Your brain will be damaged reading this
This story was so good.... the mc had amazing character.....
Then a fantasy world became Chinese.....racism became a major part (because if it is clans then it's just rich people who don't care about others and their own less fortunate family members in their race for resources but when it's Nations then everyone is together in their "righteousness")
The author wrote a good story. It was poisoned by making it insulting to all audiences but one. We love the fictional characters because they are COMPLETELY separate from our reality. Don't send our issues to them
This is definitely an interesting story to get into. Besides having to wait for the more chapters I throughly enjoy this story. I can’t wait to see how this develops further.
Given the prospect as well as potential it will be long one, but will you be dropping it in the middle? Otherwise reading a downgraded version of the overgeared and even not complete wil be waste of time
the history is funny and has a good quality of writing, but the frequency of updates is something that makes you onder if the history is even going to be uploaded again
still patiently waiting for someone to start translating this again. was always one of my faves, just always regret not getting to finish it. someone fix this for me
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I was expecting him to be good by the second season but no. Having a system apparently makes you double your efforts while gaining nothing. This story would've been better without the system. Anyway good luck with the story.
"A red meteor falls down and hits the earth killing several hundred people in less than three hours ...but he wasn’t one of those peoples."
- How small is this meteor to only kill hundreds of people in three hours?
- If it's a big meteor, how far apart did people live to only suffer hundreds of casualties?
- Or did the meteor hit a small village, isolated from the rest of the world?
- Or is the world population so small, that a meteor hits the surface of the earth and ONLY kills several hundred?
- Better question yet, what time period is this? If this is the modern or future era, I'm guessing people had time to evacuate and thus only several hundred people died. And therefore "he wasn't one of them" meaning he was one of those who escaped?
"Shun Hyun was a fantasy RPG nerd who while playing his favorite game “KPOW”(King's power of war) his life became a literal game of war when his brother gets attached to a certain Game."
- First of all, what does this have to do with the red meteor?
- Are you writing two different stories?
- Several hundred people died, "HE" wasn't one of them, but we don't know who "HE" refers to.
- Is Shun Hyun related in any way to the male who did not get killed by the red meteor?
- The two paragraphs have no relevance to each other.