I found a hidden gem, each chapter makes me laugh more than the previous one, I would have liked to have more chapters, but this novel deserves the wait, so thank you for having been able to translate this work
Big ups to the author and other readers. I await more chapters. Story is so interesting. Writing quality - mechanical accuracy, spelling of words, punctuation, translation, and vocabulary must be improved. High stability of story update, keep it up! World background or setting should even be real and not limited to only anime worlds.
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this is quite good i got a few laughs , i would advise putting more detail into your discription of the people and the place like what kind of eyes the person had the surounding what the person is wearing the weather the streets the kind of aura the person carries the expression but not to much talk And with all that your book will become top notch
i read the first couple of chapters and i'm honestly really hooked on the world building. the way you listed all the specs like stamina, health, etc. was v cool because you don't see that often in novels and that tibit made it feel like an actual game
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Pretty ‘Meh’ overall. It’s about a guy who got turned into an ‘NPC’ farmer. It’s a nice concept but the author doesn’t explain at all why he thinks its a Game World.He thinks of the local lord as a ‘Player’ for no reason other than the fact that the world has a status system.The MC is also quite delusional, coming up with explanations like he’s in a public lobby of Among Us.The Author is quite fond of his writing style of ‘Tell, Don’t Show’, and the MC comes of as retarded because of it.You could read it if you’re a binge reader like me and desperate for something to read.Definitely not for picky readers who like quality. Translation is good though
Loved the plot. Story is well written, interactions are the strong part. There are a few grammatical errors but that can be fixed with proofreading. Good job!
This is pretty good! I love the writing style of this book. I love how the author depicted the atmosphere and how the author showed the character's trait.Also has a bit of humor, which is always great! Hehe!Great job, author! Wishing you good luck! <3
Story is really telling of a reincarnation of a love one yet also an enemy of the her family.... but known to everyone the seed was growing within the subject and while he still could not remember his previous life.... He is still a threat to the love he desires most.... when he recovers his SOUL strength and recognize himself.Excellent author and translator.... my appreciation abs due respect and courtesy....
This... this really something beyond any harem story available. If you like harem + sci-fi + pirate theme combined with star wars-like plot, this story is really for you. Definitely recommend, mostly because the plot is super intriguing.