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Hi author here, this is my debut novel and it is close to my heart. I know that itll impact you in a very special way. You haven't read a book like this.Find out the secrets Michael knows and follow Rose on her journey to find God.In the last days, the end is here.
There is literally nothing to Say since there is no story.That just a hidden rich man in a show that do some things but no one believe him
everything is good, as what i have observed from the first 40 chapters and the story is interesting that i feels new to me, a reader of few books ( or 100-200 books so far), so please vote for this and i hope this will be updated asap. I'll certainly support this novel 'til the end of this book.
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Ive read this story to chapter 91 but i have to say the quality is good spelling and all that but reading this story gave me wip lash there is no real constant story to it everything changes and there is almost no link to the flow of the story caracters are half flushed i feel if the author could pick a direction in the story and stick with it and work on the caracters they could make a amazing story with their creativity but as this story is its almost as if its 4 stories half a.s.sedly stuffed together not to mention the random skips that unnecessarily jump time to progress plot where there was more to be shown and would of made the story far better with the detail at witch the story sorely lacks id rate this lower totally but the quality of the general writing was good and it seems to update often its the content of the story that lacks any real value and if the author can fix that could be a amazing writer as its the main part of any story
First of all, the character development is quite lacking. the author didn't explain why MC got this game like system in his mind. what kind of good deeds he had done before which granted him such cheat.Second, the way he stitches wound on Mr. Yang is too exaggerating. the wound is quite deep which affect the blood vessel. it should be stitched with different surgery thread for each type of wound. for the blood vessel, for the tendon and last for the skins. it becomes hilarious when MC did it only in one go of stitches.Third, the way he gets his first fans girl also ridiculous. Just by making stitches on the girl's brother tattoo she gives MC quite a favor. it's not even a wound that life-threatening, you know!
So many unnecessary words.The grammar is terrible, the plot itself makes no sense, the main character is just extremely unlikeable, and the author can’t seem to stop saying things that don’t even need to be said.I mean, Jesus. If the main character makes toast, the author would give an extremely detailed explanation as if babies are reading this. The author is clearly trying to seem smart, wise, and philosophical, but it comes off as annoying, especially when it completely breaks the immersion.One second, the main character will be having a conversation, and in the next second, he’ll start talking to himself for half of the chapter just to come to a single conclusion.
I think this novel should be good, since I love Atg, however I wish it was Shisui instead of Itachi, I like him more, thats my only complaint honestly.
I like it so far I hope he doesn't become super op from the beginning and i hope he gets a power similar to Chakra or some of the elements Kakashi could use with his jutsu
Akhirnya ada sambungan nya, 30 chapter pertama lumayan bagus, enak dibacanya dan progres ceritanya juga lumayan... Sip lanjut untuk dibaca lagi
Repetitive, uninspired, childish garbage. Some of the worst writing I've seen in a while. Also very iffy translation choices for some of the core words used.
