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Es fluida en algunas partes confusa pero muy buena novela y interesante el que agreges aparte del tradicional sistema de cultivo que integres otros sistemas en si como mana y o otros estoy impaciente por seguir leyendo más de está excelente historia
One more review closer to extra chaps :). Anyways check out the review by Bird of Paradise which basically drew me into this novel. From the first chapter it hooks you in, and the further you read, the more the novel coils it’s slippery grasp around you. I’ll definitely be following this novel closely. Goo job author!
Announcement!I will release extra chapters if this book enters New book ranking by the end of the week!!!top 15= 1extra chaptertop 10= 2extra chaptertop 5= 3extra chapter
Sage, what a pleasant name for a protagonist. Anyway, what a great start. Disaster strikes, and now the protagonist must struggle to survive. What a great concept.This is an amazing novel. I recommend it.I will now leave my Jojo mark.
Okay, in your synopsis, you did say that it was a light read. I find your writing style in this Webnovel to be humorous. It got a few light chuckles from me. The system is well built, I will give you that. I liked the character dynamics between Samantha and Jake. By the way, KONO DIO DA!!!-CodeW
I'm on the 4th chapter and just felt the need to say this. I LOVE IT!❤ You have writing skills and the story itself is compelling to me ? okay I'm going to continue
This story is unique. The idea is pretty interesting. And the story development is not slow or fast. It is readable and intriguing. With every chapter, things are getting more intriguing.
only a few chapters in and first thoughts on the story is that its confusing and weird. Constant switching between 1st and 3rd person every other sentence doesn't help either. Looking at the last upload makes the novel looked dropped so thats my main reason not going to continue. No point getting invested in a story for it to never continue.
Don't bother negatif review about the mc is bla bla bla... tbh i like this type mc is not typical shounen isekai hero that is naive... MORE PLEASE, DONT DROP IT
I've only read a few chapters so these are my initial thoughts. The power scaling is quite lame, at low levels, warriors should be able to kill mages, much less high-level fighters to magical beasts. They both use mana so why are the mages so over-glorified, if being a warrior is that weak compared to mages, why would anyone consider being one? The writing style and story so far are good though, I don't find it hard to keep engaged and can imagine the scene being told adequately.
A really great story that I have absolutely fallen in love with the character. Not too strong not too weak and a balanced character. I also like the unique class itself, and would love to see future chapters to the story. Hope you come back soon to update.
