Really an amazing story. Its what you expect of a reencarnation/videogame novel but it has its unique strong points. For starters, his actions do not change the history of the game(yet, they probably will), but it is the AI he programmed that fills the gaps and makes the world different from ehat he programmed. Characters so far are solid and the world, as far as we've seen, is well thought and built. MC is real funny sometimes, which affs to his charm. Author is not a native english speaker, so he sometimes makes grammar or spelling mistakes, but it is nothing too obvious and I dare say his writing quality and syntax is better than most english speakers. As for updates stability, he is commited and usually updates once a day, but he sometimes takes breaks that are a bit too long. Anyway, overall I would give a 4.5, but since I like this story so much I decided on five. Really a good read. Highly recommended.
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First 2 chapters seemed like a really funny parody of SAO and it IS that too, but it’s so much more! This is a really good book and you should give it a chance!
Extremely interesting characters, abilities, and story! Very different from any other "magic" I've seen in a story before. I'm interested in seeing where the story goes. Definitely will be sharing this one with some friends ?
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Good god of comedy..this novel really funny..i love it..this is my#1 novel..please don't drop and continue writing..all stone for you from now on
The mc is not a coward like some people are saying. I've read further on the mtl and the mc has a heroic side of himself. It's just that it is suppressed for some reason. Plus as the story progresses the mc's character grows making him a dynamic character. It would be boring to have a static mc in this type of novel. For further info on what i think about this novel, read my earlier review
sorry man, but you should work more on your pacing. The first chapter was great for an opening, but for the next 5 chapters, it was like reading the same thing over and over again.
Great story has a lot of potential and the horns or tail part i would choose horn because it looks freaking badass. Well anyway don t abdoned this story and I'll try to give a power st o e everyday
well the story has a lot of potential there is simply too many chapters wasted with life and basically a whole Lotta nothing that needs .
I love this!!I'm only on the first few chapters, but I really like how this story was set up. The quality of this story is actually much higher than a lot of the contracted novels here. There are some grammatical errors here and there, but that doesn't matter to me as long as I can grasp the story. And it's great! Keep going on this!
Awesome Idea! And right off the bat we get a first harem member who is literally a freaking GODDESS! 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140