I heard a loud bang in my head. F*** Y**! I wanted to shout at him. Deep inside I knew he was only trying to help but... it would have been better if he did not put the word "snot" on his sentence. He could have rephrased it and leave me with dignity but he did not!
I'm really enjoying how the story is going. Hope you continue this novel. Keep up the good work author-san. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Just more garbage. Don't waste your time and money reading this. EXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPXEXPPXPXPXPPX
Enjoying the novel so far but the author seems to have trouble remebering numbers in chaptersFor example at the start it was said there was 500 million people in the military base camp but then in later chapters it was 5 milllion.He constantly exaggerates numbers, In the latest couple of chapters its a auction where the mc puts something on auction and receives money prepaid before auction starts which he uses to buy 108mil worth of stuff but then in the auction his thing went up in price to 10mil and he says he has never seen that much money. And at the start of the auction was a d class weapon supposedly worth billions but later in but they skip that because everyone wants mcs stuff which he thenauctions off for 100 hundred million (Which somehow becomes 1 billion in the next chapter) But the auctioneer says he has never sold anything worth that much
A really great book with lots of mystery and world building.Writing Quality: In the beginning everything was easy to read. But in the later chapters, the writing quality seems to drop. Wrong words/spellings, bad grammar.Story Development: In the beginning we know very little of world and follow the MC in his journey. He struggles a lot and learn through hard work and a little bit of help her and there. As he journeys in this new world he learns many things and grows. His current goal is to meet his wife, so he has to work hard in order to accomplish that.Character Design: The MC has multiple names, due to his past, but finds out his true name in this new world. He is calculative, hard working, studious, laid back, and willing to put in a lot of effort to accomplish his goal. We meet other characters in this new world and they each have their own struggles and powers. We meet his wife as she progresses in here own journey in the world.Update Stability: Just caught up with all the chapters. So don't know the schedule.World Background: World is quite unique. Everyone brought to the world goes through a unique realm/test; white/green, yellow, red, black, based on the person's life. The MCisnt the first person in the world, nor is he the last. Everyone gets an island and their journey begins.
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Loving the story so far, please add more detail when you create your world. KEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP IT UP!!!
I mean... why not. People that haven't read it properly giving low ratings so I decided to do the opposite. God luck and btw I like the book cover
this is a great story and while there are some mistakes along the way with writing and side characters which was already mentioned and addressed so this is great. if I could pay for more updates I would
It's a bot using MTL and claiming someone human translated this, I am sure of it
This review contains some spoilers for first few chapters.Writing quality - Compared to the standard of Wn, the writing is top notch. It's descriptive and detailed.Story development - Not much to say as only read first 5 chaps.Character Design - The mc is interesting to say the least, but also feels like a typical one. When his village was raided, people and his own mother met brutal end but at that time he only thought of himself. This tells a lot about his character. Just what is his experiences in the past life for him to become like this? Or was he born like that? Only by reading further will we able to know.Updating Stability - I have personally talked with the author and I know that the stockpile is huge. So updates will be pretty stable.World Background - Again not much to say but that the world will be harsh and brutal.Overall, SpaceMage is highly recommended.