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I’m not sure I’m being generous with the ratings but based on what I’ve read it’s a well deserved one.While the concept of the story itself is not unique but the execution itself is noteworthy. Unlike most story of this genre where the MC got reincarnated back to the beginning of the game with their in game knowledge to exploit, the Mc here actually have to take a setback by having to start over albeit with a sassy and op system and a new hidden class.While a lot of readers might be put off by the mc’s lack of op-ness I can totally feel the potential in his development in the future.The world building is decent but it definitely needs a hit more lore to spice it up since at the moment the npc seems to be more of a backdrop rather than crucial figures in the game.
- - - - 200 chapter review - - - -Take into account:- The novel is written by a guy like you or me, not a Japanese manga team.- The Author gets paid by people’s donations and stones, and with that has written hundreds of chapters.Negatives;- The first part of the novel (up to 56-80ish) is riddled with errors and inconsistencies, often dramatically breaking the feeling of immersion. It gives the impression that the Author was personally just scrapping by with his novel, and not thinking everything through.- The first portion also is pretty cliché in its story, (but would yours be better? ?u200d♂️).- Lots of the later chapters are premium, but that’s typical with novels now, the chapters also vastly vary in size at that point.Positives:- For being a video game plot, the story elements come across as fresh, even with the cliché under-developed presentations.- Even though typical ‘emotional bait’ was used, I couldn’t help but get really angry and involved in the negative events happening to the MC. Mostly I felt more invested in the MC’s real life than in his game life, which is fine! ?- The writing quality of the later chapters really improves and you can’t help but realize that the Author actually has great talent. ((Good job Author))- I didn’t think this would be another ‘daily addiction’ novel by the time I finished, but I was wrong. —-((AUTHOR: Don’t take what people say here so seriously, the positive or the negative. You just write the story for yourself and find some irl buds to get your positive feedback from. Humans with the internet’s anonymity will say some awful, hateful things, without thinking twice. Plus, the internet has some mentally messed up people who get angry for no reason. Personally I have some cool friends through board games, there are usually local clubs most places. The goal being finding people who you can relate to without a screen between you.))
I really like this novel. If there is a thing I am bothered about, it's that at first the MC is overpowered and from chapter ~300 he gets pummeled by every opponent. He loses most of his fights and is only trying to get back what he lost.Otherwise, brilliant story and definitely a worthy read.
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What next? Rearing pigs? or Cleaning bathrooms? .
This story was just too boring, couldn’t make it past chapter 28, let me know if it gets better later but currently I couldn’t get into it.(Better = little sister dead/no longer mentioned; Main characters EQ/IQ is a lot higher; the fights are smarter than standing round a corner and punching a line of monsters that come through one at a time and finally that the worlds setting is shown, e.g. the parents job is explained, currently the story gives no details in this regard, they could be making and selling board games but that wouldn’t fit the setting.)The characters are stupid and annoying.I can’t tell what annoys me more, the main character or the little ‘sister’ the top 4 mentioned characters are the main character the ‘sister’ and the parents all of which I currently can’t stand.The only story development is the main character gets stronger and the sister can no longer bully him physically so she must do it in other ways while he enjoys every bit of it. Maybe the story will develop when he goes to another planet but I doubt it, it will probably feel the exact same no matter the planet, just with different monsters on it.The world background is ludicrous, and all I know so far is that they can travel anywhere in space and have met many other races which are either good or bad, bad being insect monsters and other ugly things while the good races are the elves(only race mentioned in passing), humans are apparently one of if not the weakest race and only survived with the help of the elves yet I have only seen human so far and other bad races through the vr game he played, unless they’re all mixed raced half elves now, don’t know because the story hasn’t gone into any detail about this.Bad/10
I like the idea. I dislike the execution. The story is extremely bland. There's no soul to it at all. The MC has bs background but he doesn't use it nearly as much as he should. The system is bogus, like seriously, why would he spend points on cultivation/martial techniques she should have already known/mastered in his past life? That's just stupid.
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the MC starts weak minded in the beginning of the story but after getting some choices, his brain works but still he's not entirely dependent on the system... even though there's loophole on how the system works, it doesnt makes the MC superfat in a fast pace... the backstory of supporting character a.k.a villains is very brief which is hindering for bigger plot... to author : somehow i just reminded about park saeroyi story as reverence to enlight the author (if you got my idea, we are on same page). the supporting characters shoud got better background story like the one who Zhao Zen meet in the hotel.. that build up is very good to establish his position in the story...
Okay so let me just say this whole chapter sequence is a masterclass in dramatic irony and I'm not even mad about it. Qi Chenyan finds that tie clip and instead of just... I don't know, confronting her about it, he does the most Qi Chenyan thing possible and proposes marriage. Like bro, you just found out she was buying a birthday gift for someone else THREE DAYS AGO and your immediate reaction is to ask her to marry you tonight at 11 PM? The plot is absolutely feeding us tension on a silver platter here. The whole setup with the vaccine scene is genius because on the surface it's just domestic fluff—showering, hair drying, getting a shot—but underneath every single moment is loaded with his internal crisis. He's literally touching her, being intimate, calling her "baby" for the first time in over a decade, while his mind is screaming about He Sheng. And then the proposal drops like a bomb. Shi Xing's reaction is everything too—she cries and says yes immediately, but the reader knows (or at least Qi Chenyan knows) that this might be performative love on her part. The narrative arc here is so tight. Every scene builds on the last: the kitchen moment establishes their physical chemistry, the tie clip discovery plants the seed of doubt, the hair-drying scene shows his vulnerability, and then BOOM, marriage proposal. It's chaotic and messy and absolutely perfect for a romance novel.
I have liked all of your others works, this one is probably gonna be the best one if have a better update stability, but is still gonna be good with this rithyn