Not good at all.
this book is amazing as of rn. there are many things he could do but tbh its pretty good i wouldnt mind if he didnt explain the people a bit deeper in the future though.
This story is good so far getting more interesting as it goes could use more background work but I like it a lot can't wait to see how involved the story gets
From what I read so far I like the story development and the way some of the characters interaction. The writing itself could use some proof reading or better grammar corrections since there are a lot of wrong tense usage. It’s a very relaxing read. Thank you for writing. Keep it up!
I'm only 6% into this book but I havent been able to but it down. And I'm only in chapter 4. I love how the characters mesh together well. I love how the mc is very cocky but refine at the same time. And how mc female lead is also very cocky but in a good way If that make any sense. I cant wait to see how this story develops.
Poor thing, he died and reincarnate to a world that had similarities to the game he's developing to begun with.What made me laugh is that he bled from rabbits attack. Well... he chosen elf race and had started adventuring.Fighting monsters and now a boss level thingy.Funny goddess and author made her a pretty one.Story is good, well let's see how many chapters did author planned ahead for us!
Hope upon hopeChoice upon choiceChance upon luckSing to this hollowed groundShall light read upon the stars’ lightAnd beckons upon a new story.Let us see the virtual world crash upon the moon’s sight.
It was cool ig.
Surprisingly Very Good.I went in with low expectations because it was a simulator novel, but the twist that the Empress and MC share the simulator (explained in Second Chapter) makes it quite unique from the rest of these types. The potential plot developments that could arise from other twists (which I won’t spoil) also set this apart from similar stories. The MC actually has a decent brain (can’t say the same for the Empress) and he appears to be competent in kingdom building/management. I really hope that if this does devolve into a harem novel, that the empresses are at least well-fleshed out. As of Ch 19, we’ve gotten very little development from the Empress, however chronologically it’s only been a few days; there are plenty of opportunities to do so. The translation is great: no pronoun errors, no choppy/convoluted messes, and no name switching. While there is no overarching goal/antagonist to overcome, there is so much potential here that I have to give this novel a 5. Such a fresh take (as of Ch 19) on a bland, oversaturated genre.
It seems like comedy.It feels like comedy.It should be comedy.It will be comedy,therefore the comedy shall comeand be voted for. be praised for comedy
So while I enjoyed the story, it felt really similar to a lot of novels, I stopped somewhere close to chapter 140, and I remember the last arc that it was on at the time, was just a sped up version of another story I had read before almost to a T, same drama, responses, and fights, the main idea of the novel is very similar to worldwide simulation era, and while I'm not as sure about the other worlds, the 3rd one felt very familiar, so I stopped reading as the deja vu was starting to make me feel weird, overall enjoyable novel if you haven't read the stuff it is using or based on
So hooked... can't wait for this to release more chapters.Definitely my favourite novel right now... A must read if u like cultivation and battling monsters