Subsequently, Duan Ling Tian noticed that Li Rou had placed her hand on his chest…
Reverent Tai Xu leaves with a smile.
The story is cool, as the story I read about gangsters are too brutal, looking forward to how it will turn outThe flow is good but for me the chapters are too short which is good for some as they like to have a short read! Good job and keep it up!
overall, this story is an intriguing one, the writing is top notch although, still needs a bit of improvement, still it's a wonderful book . Good job author!?
I'm gonna be shameless and leave a review until I get a rating and don't need this anymore, anyways, the story is as described in the synopsis, also, you might be confused as to why things are unknown even after the prologue, it is intentional M. M is out
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Great novel, can stop reading i wonder if the author is planning to write more because id definitely read it! Currently on chpt 26 but it felt like it was so full of content like i lived a whole lifetime lol!
it's all about a regressor female lead but on ML POV, just stuff full of fluff if you want to die in envy or diabetes then read this and eat dog food. It's quiet refreshing for a novel with male progatonist without a hint of action(?) just pure romance. I'm a deity, I can't fall for this petty mortal tricks but I can't deny that I really like this so-called-all-knowing-girlfriend.
Very good novel, basically I have a negative idea of the genre and you will understand that I'm not a fan at all, that won't change. BUT ! You have not done what i often criticize in this genre, in other words something completely absurd and cliché, you are only taking up the codes of the genre by adding your originality to it and that is probably why I was caught in the story, however it’s too different from what I like to read in and general and that's why it won't be one of my classics. I can only make two comments to you and that’s to be careful with the way you bring information, I find that you are not subtle enough and that will only enrich the development of your characters and your intrigue which are already excellent and secondly pay attention to the structure of your sentences, I find it a little too compact and I have the impression that the actions follow one another too quickly sometimes. Otherwise I can only congratulate you for making me like an Idols novel, it's a feat, believe me! ?
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I like the concept and story so far . Hope there is more dungeon building though but maybe that happens later . Need words .........