DarwinLewis2556
Good translation speed, world building, characterization, plot development...really, Everything is good except the MC.I don’t get why that is. Side characters are great, but the MC seems to not be tethered at all! He’s the type of MC that’s selfish, stupid, stubborn and arrogant but genuinely believes that he’s DOING GOOD despite causing world-wide (economic, politic, and social) disasters, misery, and destroying innocent lives all over the place. A bad sexist hypocrite at his finest. At this point, I honestly believe that it’s only plot armour that prevents the rest of humanity from banding together and eliminating him before he causes more harm.
I literally have no idea whats happening. Does anything get explained soon ? Random sht keeps happening and we dont even know anything. Like is there going to be an explanation soon ?Also with how he is acting, like not knowing anything how tf are his companions not suspicions?
Good bookTbh I’m doing this mostly for the reward but it was a good book and I recommend it to anyone who like the gameLololololololololilolololololo
I'm not a huge fan of isekai I only watch it to pass time. but your story is good i would recommend it 11/10 nice story and character development.
Love it Like it please dont drop it
I like the idea of which the story is centered upon. Like the characters, too. My biggest problem with the story is that the grammar is horrible. It is very hard to understand in some cases. If the grammar is fixed, the overall story will improve.
Pretty awesome start. This book is so great. The plot is very interesting that it hooks you from pages to pages. I asume there will be a lot to read from this story.Not to mention, the writing style is simply and easy understanding. Great work author
It is similar to "Cultivation bigshot" in terms of the lifestyle skills of the MC, and "My senior brother is too steady" in terms of the ambience and the female lead or the master resembles aunt-master Jiu Jiu in terms of character.
https://m.qidian.com/book/1025025602/617443502 this is a link where this can be read since this site doesn't want to post it ...............
Great book always look forward to updates and makes my day a bit less boring,...........,.....................................................
Thank you for sharing the tips on how to write a book. It motivates me to write a book and the first volume had done called Reincarnated to Devil. Please feel free to comment or suggestion really appreciate it.
This book has a fresh perspective and pov if the characters. The writing style is amazing cause it not only makes me hungry just by reading this but also expresses a lot of emotions (even after having my dinner ?). My only suggestion or complaint is that there are very less chapters!!? Still great work and keep on writing?
