Zefyr
bom ......................................
First of all, to those wondering, this one has the better TL so read this one, with that out of the way, i came from the manhwa and this story is just very epic, it truly feels like we are witnessing a legend coming to life
Woah! This book has huge potential! This is a totally new trope! Very few grammar mistakes. An enjoyable read. I definitely recommend this book!You are a very good writer! keep making more chapter! looking forward to it!
Interesting novel. I liked it's story development and character design. Hope for something more interesting.Please keep updating new chapters ??
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Excellent work done by an author and I would recommend this book to all the book lovers who wants to read a real thriller stuff.
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i have never actually tried to review a novel properly but i will try...This novel is better for slow readers, and those that love gradual progressing plots and reasonable developments, it has a great amount of mystery to it along with a thrilling feeling while reading it, the few fight scenes it has had so far are wonderfully written any you can really imagine it.Relations ships are stable and not erratic, when a relationship is made they are set in stone until otherwise made to change unlike some authors that have the relationships of people changing day in and day out.i would say this novel is one where you have to think on what might happen next as the while the progressing may seem almost random it is great... and i am repeating thing right now... anyway what i was saying is that if you want to guess what is going to happen next you need to pay attention to little details. The entire novel so far flows from one situation to another seamlessly and beautifully.Since, it was so good i will just leave the total score at 5 stars, and ignore the stability....
SHAMELESS AUTHOR HERE GIVING HIMSELF 5 STARS ONCE AGAIN WRYYYYY. But all jokes aside, this is probably an novel that I put most effort into and I'm glad to say, I'm shameless.
TLDR: liked the previous 2 this one will probably do wellA little early to give a review but I just finished reading the first two books in this series evolutionary prison and evolutionary convict and found them very enjoyable and not nearly as cliche as many other stories. I see no reason this one wouldn't live up to the hype and hope the author keeps up the good work.
Excellent writing skills but too lgbt for me. There are obvious parallels between the main character and the reader in how he feels and how we are supposed to. Many times the mc posed valid reasoning that made me question my discomfort at the ever increasing focus on lgbt issues. Maybe I'm reading too much into it but it felt like the mc was a strawman for the reader and his assistant trying to push lgbt stories to him is the author trying to tell me that the characters doesn't have to be like me for me to enjoy the read. Well it didn't work and I'm dropping the novel, but credit where credit is due if you don't mind the anti-corporate agenda (which I don't) and the large focus on lgbt issues (which I do) then it's an excellent novel.
I think this novel is underrated and should deserve more attention and more readers even if it is one of the thousands of system novels it still deserves Way more recognition because it's one of the better system novels
