Okay so I have to talk about how this whole body-swap setup is paced because honestly the author is playing 4D chess with narrative structure here. Let me start with the very first scene—Xue Wanyao is on a carriage ride, and instead of just having her think about the situation, she's actively planning to get pregnant so that Gu Zhuo has to bear the child. That is such a wild opening beat. It immediately tells me this story isn't taking itself too seriously, and I love that. The pacing here is deliberate—she's reflecting, processing, and the author lets her mind wander, which gives us this intimate glimpse into how both characters are adapting to their swapped circumstances. Then we cut to the carriage arriving at the Prince of Chu's mansion, and the scene transitions are so smooth. One moment she's deep in thought, the next she's being woken up by a maid. The author doesn't waste time on unnecessary description—we get straight to the action. And then Princess Changping appears and drops the bomb about the Flower Festival and choosing a princess consort. Boom. Just like that, the stakes go from personal discomfort to a full-blown plot complication. What I really appreciate is how the author controls the tension. The body-swap revelation isn't dumped on us all at once—we learn it gradually through dialogue and internal monologue. By the time we get to the scene where Gu Zhuo is practicing martial arts in Xue Wanyao's body and can't even do a side flip without twisting her waist, I'm laughing out loud. The humor breaks the tension perfectly, and then immediately after, we're back to the serious question of whether a maiden can master the Yunying Art. The author knows exactly when to let me breathe and when to tighten the screws. The chapter ends with Qin Lang appearing and recognizing Xue Wanyao from the water incident, which is a cliffhanger that made me immediately want to read the next chapter. The pacing here is tight—no filler, every scene advances either character development or plot. I couldn't put it down.
Let me just start by saying: Liú Xiǎomǎn's dialogue in this chapter is the single funniest, most satisfying thing I've read in ages. The way she dismantles her aunt is COMEDY GOLD wrapped in revenge fantasy. Wáng Jīnhuā kicks the door and immediately goes for the 'filial piety' card—'When there's food, you must show filial respect!'—and Liú Xiǎomǎn's response? She doesn't even raise her voice at first. She just... logically eviscerates her. 'Grandmother herself said the three of us were unlucky, plague-bringers, thrown out to fend for ourselves.' She weaponizes the family's own rejection against them. That's not just witty, that's TACTICAL. But then she goes FULL NUCLEAR with this line: 'Oh—This mass grave does have meat… meat nobody claims. Aunt, if you're really craving it, go dig it yourself!' I literally screamed reading that. The way she deliberately draws out the tone, the 'strange smile curling her lips'—the author really understood that this scene needed to be both terrifying and hilarious. Wáng Jīnhuā is 'superstitious to the core' and Liú Xiǎomǎn knows EXACTLY which button to press. The dialogue also does something really smart with voice differentiation. Wáng Jīnhuā's speech is all sharp edges and noise—'nails scraping across an iron pot,' 'shrill voice,' 'stamping her feet.' Liú Xiǎomǎn's speech is 'cold and clear,' 'softly but clearly,' 'slowly and deliberately.' The contrast in how they speak tells you everything about who they are without the author having to explain it.
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.Your turn. And I look forward to your thoughts on my Going In Completely Blind fanfic.
I guess am really shameless dropping a review for my book the second time. Somebody got to do it ........you know what they say be your own number one supporter....as much as I want to believe you like my book I font cause you guys don't comment
This is the author speaking Guys this is my first time writing something Please review the work and tell me how to improve Thanks.......??
The world build is great in my opinion . Keep it up, looking forward to next chapters
This novel is very promising. However, as it stands today, it contains typographical and grammatical errors—errors that should have been corrected before the chapters were released.Keep it up author-san. I pray for your success.
I think Adam is a good MC, he is relatable and funny which makes the novel fun to read. I wanna see more of the God's powers as Adam develops his owns.
This us a promising story with good characters and a great background. The scenes are good enough and it is interesting enough. I love the flavour of the book , it keeps me interested.
I’ve only read a few chapters, and I’m already hooked! This story has so much potential, and I can’t wait to see where it goes. Loving the drama and excitement
Is there a relationship between the novel: "I can Use Filthy Game Skills In The Real World" and "I Can Use Filthy Game Currency In The Real World"Is it a remake?I read the free chapters from the first one The writing is good, but the sex act is very very long. It loses its fun when it goes on too long.
Dear Author, I'm a big admirer of your writing! After reading your book, I was blown away by your talent. I have some ideas on how to take your book to the next level and expand its readership. Would you be willing to listen to my feedback and suggestions?