Traveler's Will is very solidly written, especially once the chapters reach the 20s and over. The author's sense of pace is very deliberate with the details, and really makes you feel the situation in a granular sense. The main character, Asdras, is strongly crafted, and while there is a System, it's not front-and-center in a way that interferes with the enjoyment. (Though that does make it a little harder to wrap one's head around).There are a few word use issues that are more obtuse than incorrect, and narratively I did find the MC gets his hand held by the plot somewhat, with other characters pushing him along a lot at times. But overall it's a solid read and quite enjoyable! Definitely good potential.
henlo, author here. A few things you should know about this book.1. This is the first book that I'm committed to finishing until the end (likely 300+ chapters)2. I am ESL. Please notify me when you find a grammatical error in the book3. Technically this is not my first time writing a book. I've made a school project novel of 200 pages in another language.4. I like to think that the story focuses a lot on the relationship between characters rather than the plot of the game world. Of course, I'm still doing a lot of world building. But just keep that in mindIf you're still reading this sentence then thank you. Please check out the book if you're interested.Feel free to ask your questions. Seems like other authors do QnAs in their reviews
Love, Nathan! ? There are so many romantic moments, but it's definitely a slow burn. The fantasy elements are so mysterious, though! I keep wondering what certain things are and what's going on. Since it's still ongoing, I hope some of the answers will be revealed later.
To be honest, after reading this, I've spent far too much time trying to find something similar. So read with knowledge that this story is one of the kind.
waiting for the chapters fasttt please....
1.Slow pace needs time-skips.2.The MC is still a 5-year-old after almost 100 chapters.3.Too many unnecessary fillers.4.Excessive focus on background characters.I enjoyed the first 20 to 30 chapters, thinking it was just setting up the story and anticipating a time skip. But oh boy, was I wrong. We're 100 chapters in, and there’s still a ton of unnecessary filler. This novel seems more focused on background characters than the main character.For example, there are 50 to 70 chapters of random mining for mana stones—completely unnecessary. This could have been handled earlier in the story or skipped altogether. Instead, we get a drawn-out sequence that feels like it’s there just to pad the novel. And the whole "killing people with snakes" arc feels like a convoluted way to stretch the story without adding meaningful progression.Even worse, after 100 chapters, the protagonist is still a 5-year-old acting like a full-grown adult. I get that this is a fantasy story, but even fantasy needs some realism. It’s becoming boring. You could skip 10 to 30 chapters and still feel like you haven’t missed anything—that’s how painfully slow the story is.The writing itself is solid, but the pacing and unnecessary padding make this novel feel disappointing. It could really benefit from a rewrite or a significant cut to its length.
Better than horrors's comic. 10/10 series
big fan of the other works of author and this one certainly didn't disappoint only read chapter 1 but as a big fan already giving it a 5 don't dissapoint me.....
Congrats on the successful launch of your work! I’ve added it to my collection and started reading. Everything’s going well so far. I’m just a casual reader, so I don’t have much advice to give—I’m just here to enjoy the story!
even though I haven't read yet but it's looks interesting
Writing quality needs a bit more work, and the story development too, i need to see more to change my mind, other than that love this novel and would highly recommend
what an interesting story to read..something ne wand exciting