Overall, this novel is pretty great, I can't say the Grammer or English is the best, since there is things such as "Self made", which should be Makeshift and "Hold the grass" which I believe should be something like Hold the phone. The updating stability is also something that's left to be desired, since there had been a large time gap between the most recently updated chapter and the one before, more than 20 days. But aside from that, I really like the the characters, the world building is pretty generic though. The system is also the more unique ones out there and I like how his transmigration actually played a key role since it allowed him to connect his world to future earth an make it a "game".
Overall, a 3.8 star novel! And a bonus for it being free too. I just made it 5 stars to show support though.
This books deserves more than 5 stars.
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So far!
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i get this is fiction but the author is comparing these kids to pro player? honestly losing brain cells reading this
For the first 14 chapters, it a good novel. Also, having the MC not getting the class that he want is kinda of refreshing
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A pretty good story I am excited for more to come hope you keep up the same pace like you are doing write now I like the pace, your plotting of the characters and Story line is very good, nice keeping me to read daily it's your talent hope you keep writing for US
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Man, is this even real? I mean even at the chapter 1, the story is too fast... I'm still gonna read it actually... Interesting story
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The first time l saw this book, l thought it'd be the ordinary "virus" books buh oh boy was l wrong. The author not only showed me she has talent buh passion as well...l jhus gat hooked from the first chapter and zinged. So to u who's reading this ryt now....honey buckle up and come join the ride & trust me when l say u won't regret it!
Have been reading this novel for a long time and of course following it too. Though I am not a person who reads fantasy novels but this novel surely caught my attention and its not just fantasy only but its sooooo funny! Keep the great work going and let us, readers see more of Saksham's adventure.