The only flaw this story has is its translation.
It's already obvious to anyone that this novel is going to be full of nationalism, I'm going to stop here so I don't waste my time............
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So this is just a wuick review for more chapters basically, but I'll just add my opinion and suggestions. So base on the chapters that I have read(until ch. 46), it is going pretty good.
Pros
1. Great grammar - I can barely spot any mistakes in grammar until ch. 46
2. Realistic Characters - So the characters in this story has a certain depth to them and has some background of their own, in other words they're not like Passerby 1, 2, 3 or A, B, C
3. Good Writting Style - From what I have read, the author's writting is comparable to professional writtersa and is very to understand.
4. Simple but Clear Worldbuilding - The world building is decent, but still has flaws(ex. The other source of entertainment like games, sports, and etc. should be more advanced as the entertainment is industry is backwards right? So I think it should not be exactly the same). Overall it's ****** and easy to understand as it is just a bit in the future and the situation is the same except for the entertainment industry.
Cons
1. The MC's First Life is Just Blank - Until ch. 46 I only noticed a few hints of details regarding his first life and although I think that is not really extremely important to the story, but it helps us to understand the MC and why he became like that.
2. The MC's Personality Might Annoy Some People - From an incident in the hotel manager underestimating him and he fights back by humiliating the manager(the standard plot). In this event he may seem annoying to people as some people see him as too petty(personally I think what he did isn't right, however it is the manager's fault for stepping on his dignity first and probably did it many times as well). Inially the MC just wated to treat his friends to a meal.
3. Some Character's Personality Might Seriously Annoy You - So some characters in this story, especially a CERTAIN FAMILY AND A CERTAIN SINGER'S personality would seriosly make you mad like I was UGHHHHHHH!!!=&=¥×#*@£. I was soooo fkin FRUSTRATED.
Suggestions:
- Tone down the annoyingness of some characters.
- Don't put too much THOTS in the story.
- No Harem PLEASE!
- Try to stay orignal and don't stick too much on cliches.
-MOAR CHAPTERS.
- Don't be discouraged and stay awesome.
P.S. If you actually read that then thanks and congratualtions I guess...
What the duck just happened. Like 250 chapters got paywalled. NOT NEW ONES. OLD CHAPTERS..... THAT WERE FREE.
I don't mind if u start going premium, but that's just cheap.
Fr what the actual duck dude, that's just a disservice, who's gonna pay for something they've already read.
pretty good![img=update] didn't really need to be an isekai tho
THIS IS VERY READABLE IN MTL. This is basically a mishmash of pokemon and soul land. Dont expect a character development because our mc here is a heavenly immortal in his last life.
so far it is a really good story I like it a lot I hope that there is more chapter to come later on people should read this novel even though is only 4 chapter long it have good description about what going on and the story progressive on a normal pace not to fast and not to slow
Great story , hard to get into but worth it , i just hope you continue it.
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An amazing addition to the tamer stories. I read a lot of them and this could be up there with the best!
according to my posion dao it tells me this sh it just by the synopsis only
p s if anyone finds it's not do point out it's redeeming point .
This is a different type of story I read. It's very interesting to read. It has new aspects that I never read before. I really enjoy reading this novel.
the story is really a great hidden gem!!!
would like the author to
1. make the chapter titles more expressive
2. put on a good book cover
3. make his writing style more dramatic
4. put on a good and interesting summary
all to attract more readers...
best wishes for future