So, as the author my opinion is completely valid and obviously unbiased. With that, let's start the review!
So, what I can offer, from the beginning at least, is that the main character, Unnamed Boy, is different from most MC's I've read/watched. He's very layered, and his actions at times may not make sense, but most of his actions get explained at the end of the first arc/beginning of second.
The cast of characters is also very colorful, from the emotionless Silver-Haired Girl, the quirky Prez, and to his doting big sister Eris, they all make the story humorous and interesting.
Now, the premise of the story, as you've probably read from the description, is the Unnamed Boy's eventual adventure through time. There'll be badass fights, crushing scenes, typical stuff like that. The world itself is unique in it's own way, since the city they live in has many unusual incidents...
Overall, you should read up past the first arc to really get a feel (The first arc is 15 chapters) of the story and see if you're interested.
The last thing to note is this part of the Hidden Powers Saga, meaning the main characters abilities won't be revealed until the end of the story, so have fun theorizing!
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Good story and I just want to wright a review. LOL
Good work on the book oh and can u add all the friends Sean meets on the cover of the book I would love to see what they look like to get a better picture
I like the idea of the story I also like the main character but holy feck does it get difficult to read my man needs an editor. It’s gotten to the point where I’m not sure if I should be choosing to drop such a good idea or struggle having to read the broken English and **** grammar. Mr author please get an editor skilled in your native language and in English so you can turn this amazing idea into a readable book
The storylines are good!! I find the story entertaining to me. But, I do saw a few sentences and lines that can be fixed.
I will talk about the summary first. You can use your own idea if you want. I only give you a suggestion. (I'm not that pro myself)
" On the day of her Coronation, rebels from the enemies sect appeared. Of course, as a skilled Dragon warrior, she had nothing to worry about.
That was it until she realized the bitter truth. She was poisoned!!!"
Damn.. I don't even know what I did is right or not..??
I don't see any mistake anywhere aside from you need to search for more suitable synonym for some words in your novel. That's all!!ᕙ(＠°▽°＠)ᕗ Work hard and don't give up!!
Ok, I really like the start and I hate it from the moment it enters the Arena City.The story between Eve and him was perfect, but like any other novel (unfortunately) something serious must have happened to her (too cliché).After that, several point that disappoint me.- At the beginning a discussion with Eve that Stella was his and that it didn't bother Eve that he has other girls, but that totally changes some chapter later- He goes back to see Pengu later, but in no case goes to see Stella? or the first "toy" and future sect leader? one of the moments that started making me stop reading the novel- The death of Lucia (or Lucie?) (The Inn girl) and yeah a toy too.- Abandon Helia, for whom he was starting to have feelings.- What happenned to Katia and Elea?- Ok, there’s the problem with his soul, but frankly it becomes nonsense extract Eve's soul by ejaculating in a powerful woman, lol?- No more 18+ scenes for a while, ok, he only likes and wants Eve, but change the name of the Novel then!- "Smut Romance with THEIR Girlfriends, but after 500 chapters he still have one.
Story is pretty good. I enjoy the foreshadowing and the MC is pretty badass. His love interest is pretty much predetermined. The translation is pretty top notch too.