great novel please continue to update.
this your tipical reincarnation into becoming op novel mc is trash and his fiance betrays him and cancels their arrange marrige very common and beta m
barbaro como terminas la novela incompleta.... asi no... fuera de eso buena novela, pero de verdad dejaste a uno enganchado cuando se supone que empezará lo bueno
Mate…..your story isn’t good enough to warrant paying from chapter 9….get over yourself.
Very well made. Absoulutly worth the read, this was the first novel in a very long time that made my time just slipp away.It is quite diffrent commpared to the other dungeon novels in the way the trials are set up.The dungeon incites killing all the other challangers with big rewards but having teammates is basically a must if you want to survive. So you dont know when or if a betrayal will occur.It can make you constantlly stay on your toes. Other than this you can se my rating on everything else, but keeping in mind the updates will release like it does now. You can call these 31 chapters in 2 days a 100/5 so I dont expect the releases to be this frequent in the future but 1 chapter a day would be absoulutly perfect.
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Great story, but author need to edit/make grammar edits as needed.
Fascinating story concept. Keep up the good work!
Let's talk about what Xue Wanyao stands to lose, because it's everything. In Chapter 1 alone, she goes from being a bride on her wedding day to a woman with no family, no husband, no reputation, and two unacceptable options: suicide or a life of servitude in a temple. That's not a low point—that's rock bottom, and the author drops her there in the first seven thousand words. The external conflict is clear: society and her family are against her. The Xu family has rejected her. Her legal mother has cast her out. Her uncle has abandoned her. She has literally zero support system. But the more interesting conflict is internal—she has to make a decision with no good options. Every choice is terrible. Become a nun? Humiliating and brutal. Die? Cowardly and final. Marry a prince as a concubine? A desperate gamble with uncertain outcomes. What makes me care about the outcome is that the author has made us understand exactly what's at stake. We've seen the coldness of her family, the hypocrisy of the Xu manor, the brutal logic of a society that would rather a woman be dead than 'damaged.' When Xue Wanyao walks to Gu Zhuo's manor, we're not just wondering if she'll succeed—we're wondering if she'll survive this world at all. The tension is maintained through a series of escalating refusals. First the Xu manor rejects her. Then her family rejects her. Then Gu Zhuo himself rejects her proposal. Each rejection raises the stakes because it eliminates another escape route. By the time Princess Changping intervenes, we're relieved—but also anxious. Because a prince's concubine is still a woman with no power, in a house full of people who could destroy her. The stakes haven't decreased; they've just changed shape.
Dragging foe too long
forced completed. what a waste of time and money ............
Love it please post more chapters