Beginning of the story is typical. You can say cliche :D It's ok, these kinds of novels are fun to read but I am concerned about many things. I don't see any errors in grammar. (It might be a problem that my grammar isn't that good either.) I will continue to follow the story and update your review.Good luck! (The rating is temporary. I cannot really rate if I have only 3 chapters. It's like judging the book from its cover.)
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DONT PUT ANY INFO ON WHAT ANY OF THE CHARACTERS WILL DO IN AUTHOR NOTESITS PRETTY MUCH A SPOILER AND IDIOTIC JUST NO INFO ABOUT ANY FUTURE STORY
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A bit slow but overall a good story. The characters are well written and I really like the interaction between the MC and the System.140140140140140140140
Hello, this is Sovereign1996 with a new novel! I have high expectations for this novel, and hope that it receives a good support and is liked by all. Let me help everyone by giving a detailed synopsis without exposing some spoilers:The parallel Earth changes after the Second World War and the radiation mutates the humans on the planet. The new mutants gather and create an alliance, which basically almost bans hot weapons. Furthermore, the mutants are able to evolve their bodies and gain supernatural strength.Once again, please support my novel. Thank You!!!
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It is neither good or bad. I got to chapter 60. The novel can be divided into 2 parts: the IRL and game. I will also say I usually like video game novels, so it is rather mediocre and I mean it.The game portion is okay, but not super great. Not much that separates it from other novels or makes it super great.The IRL, to put it bluntly, is just terrible (the book starts really bad because it starts with unfathomable situations in IRL). Super minor spoiler, in one of the first couple chapters there is a plane crash and he gets hit by part of the debris. Realistically he would die by being hit, and even if the hit would not kill him, the way the *thing* hit him would. The other IRL stuff is pretty dumb, fast moving, and random at best.
It is good, the Mc has a goal and motivation, a cheat and a decisive personality. Unlike some game novels who have weak MC claiming to be pro, have rich experience and whatnot, only to suffer setbacks in the first few chapters, this one's MC lives up to expectation. As for the Mech part, we don't get to see that part yet. But yes, he can build a mech on his own with his cheat item. I just hope he would not need to go to the ends of the earth to farm precious and ultra rare materials just to build a single mech. Hopefully, it would focus more on design.
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................,..................................................., .......................................................this is a great novel so far
It's actually great at the first few chapters but as it go, the translation of the chapters became worse. Can't they be consistent with the translations? My eyes can't bear how much the decent translation became like that. I tried to continue on but I can barely process the words.