Petition to bring back 60 trial chapters and 40 free to read chapters.Petition to bring back 60 trial chapters and 40 free to read chapters.Petition to bring back 60 trial chapters and 40 free to read chapters.Petition to bring back 60 trial chapters and 40 free to read chapters.Petition to bring back 60 trial chapters and 40 free to read chapters.
the most fun r-18 story with Male mc I have read. It had a huge potential to develop to a kingdom building, cultivation or to be something like power in the shadows.But it was dropped!Every goddamn story that's my favourite......the super sex system, takes of seductress, goblins evolution.....all gets dropped!
I will be reviewing 3 sections; quality of the text, characters, and the setting only, as those were the ones that did not receive full stars.The quality of the writing is well thought out and written well, and I didn't encounter any grammatical mistakes. It reads well and fluidly.The story so far a bit confusing, and I'm not exactly sure what it will lead up to, so maybe add foreshadowing here, and there in a few chapters -- would be nice.For the final section, the setting needs to be more detailed and explained. The character's emotions and actions are explained pretty well, but the environment and setting description could use more polish. We have a general idea where the characters could be, but it's not explicitly clear to what place a character could be at during some important event, like the battles or the walking down the river, what are the surroundings? It would be a nice touch to add the full surroundings of where the characters are to build the world better.Overall, it is a good read, I like the idea of the taming!
This story has great pacing and writing. Sure, the first 2 chapters were confusing as heck, but everything gets cleared out fast. Not only is the main character great but also the side characters have flavor to them. The world built is rational and diverse which makes it easily accepted and can be immersed in. Emotional scenes were written smartly and not too drawn out. This made it easier to sympathize with the feeling the author probably wanted to convey while not being burnt out at the same time. All in all, a great read. TLDR : Smart writing, Believable characters. 5/5 stars.
Our MC suddenly awakens in the middle of the action of someone trying to kill him. Mc plot hole, he suddenly is able to save himself via a system. The pacing is decent, but simply is not my cup of tea.