Streams of Fallen Romance: The Unluckily Lucky Girl

The only complaint I have is that the writing is sometimes confusing but it seems to be getting better. Other than that i see no major issues to be unhappy about. The idea of a roman reincarnation is awesome as well.

mc is transmigrator which author doesnt tell you till like 6 chapters in, around the 11th chapter it starts to form as a cringe action movie, not to mention how the ml (the girl he saves at the start) falls in love with him, a good book to waste a few minutes on but nothing I would anticipate another chapter for.

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Our MC suddenly awakens in the middle of the action of someone trying to kill him.  Mc plot hole, he suddenly is able to save himself via a system. The pacing is decent, but simply is not my cup of tea.

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ho! okay ? good job on the story ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????