What an amazing story!!?The plot is maintained so well?i am looking forward to your next chapters and the twist and turns?Best of luck author??
We're no strangers to loveYou know the rules and so do IA full commitment's what I'm thinking ofYou wouldn't get this from any other guyI just wanna tell you how I'm feelingGotta make you understandNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youWe've known each other for so longYour heart's been aching but you're too shy to say itInside we both know what's been going onWe know the game and we're gonna play itAnd if you ask me how I'm feelingDon't tell me you're too blind to seeNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youNever gonna give, never gonna give(Give you up)We've known each other for so longYour heart's been aching but you're too shy to say itInside we both know what's been going onWe know the game and we're gonna play itI just wanna tell you how I'm feelingGotta make you understandNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbye
All in all i made it to chapter 2. I normally give at least 20 chapters of a read for a novel i choose to read. NoneTheless, this one i cant read any further. Why? Here it comes: Guy saves the girl, she r**** him, extracts his yand eneRgy so he cannot cultivate and is crippled. then she gets quadruplets and wants HIM to Take RESPONSIBILITY. the audacity. then she goes there and talks to him like he is tradh, she wonders why he is a „good for nothing and is wEak.“ Worse, the mc takes it like it is nothing. seriously? How stupid is that. /////////////////imagine the roles are reversed: Girl gets r****, then has to get children and is also forced to take care of them. now, that doeSnt sound good does it? /////////////alll in all, the novel is as bad as it can get.
I somehow like novels like this. I find it enjoyable reading an Mc with op Cheat...........................................................................
Hi Guys!Author here. If you guys enjoy the story please feel free to leave a review. More than anything, it helps motivate me to write more and more. Thank you for reading!
We riot if this doesn’t get picked. Considering it was made by TLM’s author it is going to get picked but we riot nonetheless. 140 characters sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
This is the novel I was looking for omg authorI hope u don't abandon the novel and I will help you with everything I have
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No grammatical mistakes The plot seems to be going in a nice direction....kudos to the author for working hard.... on it.good luck ................
- Harem
- Deus Ex Machina to get one more Harem member...wrote a longer review but it got deleted...
- MC thinks he is not a hero but safes evry damsel in distress...endangers his life for people he knew for 5 or 10 minutes
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