Sorry to be so mean for my first review but I want the author to take conscience that his story is event more chidlish than my little poney. The mc has only one setbacks that he forgets in the first ten chapters that is his wife’s betrayal although the author could have used this to give the mc a more complex personality than «i love everyone, everyone is beautiful come with me pluck flower». He could have used this to create a more complex relationship with lu and his friends. Like he doesn’t trust any women and is a perfect bastards until he finds the female lead.The character of the stories are either here to help the mc either... Sorry there is only this sort of character.The mc is born :Rich (check)In a lovely family (check, btw i love you lu)With true friens (check)With insane luck (check, if one day he goes in a forest i expect him to at least found a unicorn)The things with stories with a system is that it makes all too easy there are no exterior problems that the mc won’t be able to take care of. So please create some real problem.
Imma be honest the stories alright, not too shabby but like it could rlly be better. I just think you could do better, so hopefully this review will give you some good ideas, but either way, explain cultivation better, I don't get it too much and it'll really help. give him a more unique character and maybe write a little better. Anyways, thanks for the story!
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I love the freedom that players have (Im not speak english)Im from Brazil <3------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Super good book with an interesting storyline. Idk,, lots of people say how they find the system annoying and unreliable but... Iunno man, it amused me. Super underrated book.
Este fanfic es una joya para los fans .La autora/autor logra capturar la esencia de los personajes y crear una trama [emocionante/intrigante/conmovedora] que te mantendrá enganchado desde la primera página. Los detalles cuidados y la fluidez de la escritura hacen que sea difícil dejar de leer. Si eres fan de [menciona la saga o universo], ¡no te puedes perder esta historia!
Synopsis is a little off, He doesn’t get his seal broken bu just waking up one day, It will probably take him quite some time to break it. The story is okay so far, The Mc is being forced by circumstances to move along but And doesn’t have much of a choice. I hope the story gets better and he isn’t just forced to do things like the usual asian novels.
If you guessed that this novel is another generic cultivation novel, well dingalingling, youve won, and the prize is that you dont have to suffer the horrors brought upon me by reading this book.The only redeeming quality is it had potential. The premise was a bit interesting Too bad the author is utterly incapable of any meaningful story building. The fact this had potential made my experience worse due to the fact that everytime i was forced to read some bull**** reason the guy down the street hates or despises the mc, i couldnt help but think about how reading this could of brought me an emotion other than dread and exasperation.The only thing worse than this novel is the readers. Reading the comments made me consider that genocide may be a viable answer to some problems, if that problem was retarded fanboys who read self insert novels just to experience what its like to be a man. Too bad their idea of being a man entails breaking some poor ****ers kneecaps cause the author made the mcs iq equivalent to a toddler trying to crawl into an oven. The absolute number of comments saying "if you dont enjoy it then dont read" made me want to strangle the nearest thing to me. Thank god my little brother was in the other room. Even if he was, i bet i could present this novel as evidence in court and i would have a good chance of getting off scott free.Do you want to know how far i read? 458. Thats the chapter i stopped at. When i began this novel, i thought it had 400 chapters. There is over 1100. When i realized my error, i cried. I'm not even ashamed to admit it. This novel broke me. I've read so much worse, yet is this subpar piece of garbage some try to call a novel. Why? The MC is soooo bad. I hate him. ATG, MGA, the mcs in these novels are universally hated, but this dickhead somehow is worse. Never in my life did i think any person could be so incapable of self reflection.I'm not gonna list the problems this novel has. Every problem other novels have, it has too.
Ah this is a good old novel if it's not a classic. One of first few CN translated novel i read and can still remember the story line. Not finished reading it though, I think it's on 500 ish chapter and because the translation was pretty slow at that time and i then also read other and slowly forgot to check this again.The story is pretty good and rarely went boring as you expected from TJSS works. And usually his novel doesn't go way overboard like thousands of chapters and that's a good thing for me.Maybe I'll restart reading this one later.
This novel already have manhwa , the name shen win zhou wan or shen win san zhou forget , that really 1 of good manhwa im tell rigth almost likely 250 or 300 chptr ? Dont know .. Just read the manhwa forget about this novel the story in manhwa already far way ..I will give 5 star cause really like the version of manhwa
incredibly mediocre. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
weird story pattern It sucks for the reader to read this kind of story where they can't find out what was happening in the story