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Very meh. Starts off ok, but it just gets kinda boring. The cheat is inconsistent, and often long stretches go without it being used. The pace is stupid fast with a lot of possible content and development just skipped past by author. And the usual ‘sword cultivator’ MC. Even that development is incredibly generic. Boringgggg. Topped by a spotty translation where a lot of techniques names / cultivation levels etc, don’t get translated (in Chinese novels where these names are actual quite descriptive) means an overall lacklustre experience.
This novel was quite interesting. It was quite unexpected at a particular point, after the plot had been developing for a while. You see I thought they were going to go accomplish their goal, but they were actually just following along with their predetermined destiny. I was pleasantly surprised by the creativity of the author and the uniqueness of the characters. 10/10 would recommend to a friend. 11/10 would read again.
Writing a review for the fp, seems interesting from the synopsis though, I'll probably give it a shot
i love all your books,you are an amazing writer
amazing start from the novel, really cool. Start implementing more character building for other characters and preferably add a main villain. but its really amazing
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This should be categorized as science fiction man.. I don't know looks like it. The writer had described the different personality of the characters.. It's better than I expected..
I have read to chapter 66(most recent chapter, when I wrote the review).I would rate this story as good and I like it, because I was immediately immersed in the story and read all available chapters in one sitting.What i liked:+ The MC's class that provided a well balanced amount of crafting and fighting ability+ The MC's character: I liked how well he accepted his class, being introvert, capable, how he healed with the apocalypse and that he has no delusional desire for a harem and being king.+ The described worldAs the story has not ended yet and is not really far into the plot(I guess), this is not a negative point, but what I hope to still appear in the story:The title of the story is a blacksmith in the apocalypse. I don't feel that the story has gone into details about the apocalypse. So I hope that in the future, the MC will return to his world and we can really see and experience the apocalypse that happened.
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Hello guys! I am the author of this novel!This is my second novel in this platform, and I feel fairly confident about my writing quality.So guys, feel free to enjoy this novel of mine!
I would say that the theme has potential since it's not one of the most used ones. In the beginning instead of meeting Truck-kun we met Storm-sama wich failed to do her work miserably and our mc was saved and teleported to a new world to participate in "quests". My first problem with this novel is the under-developed characters (we seem to get one more companion in each world he goes to, companions that I personally don't give a damn about, except Alina cuz she was the first and the main female protagonist, but under-developed nontheless). Second big problem is the fact that the start and ending of all 4 volumes that I read till now are pretty bad, instead of exploring the world with the protagonist we get 2-3 chapters in the POV of a random character wich we don't know nothing about and get some useless info dump, wich is pretty bad in my opinion I would prefer to see the protagonist view and not some random guy, while in the ending of a volume the protagonist doesn't have time to do anything after completing the main mission he and his companions are instantly teleported to another world, wich in my opinion is a big problem since we can't see any progression in the MC's relationship with his companions cuz they're always in the missions, a 1-2 days vacation after the main mission end would be really appreciated as we could use that time to digest some information about the world that the protagonist is about to leave and get some character development...The Fairy is a problem as well since she doesn't seem to like her work that much, fairies in novels usually have a mischievous personality, this one has one too, instead of giving the information that she needs to give as a Guide she always seems to be giving the information after it's useless or a during a situation that it can become usefull, wich is pretty annoying to me since it gets boring really fast and it's not really a good way to make character development.All that said I'm still enjoying the novel and will probably continue reading it for some time, might come back to change to review if I see it getting better or worse, really hope a few of these points change in the future. **: Since i'm not a native english speaker and it's been a while since I had to write a big text I would like to apologize to the readers for problems with past/present/future situations and other things. PS2: These are my opinions and as such no1 needs to take it at face value :PTy for reading this if you did and Goodbye =)
Maybe shameless of me to rate my own novel but oh well. I would like to go ahead and thank everyone that is and that will read my novel. I know that there will be mistakes, might get slow, or maybe even boring. But that is why I need you all to help me fix these mistakes and send me on the right path as a new writer, so please don't just outright hate on my wok and only give constructive criticism. Thank you again and I hope everyone enjoys reading.
