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This novel is like an airplane taking off
Getting better by each chapter passing The mistakes that the author made at the beginning are none exsistant
A pretty good story if you are looking for a pure evil mc(eats children...) cultivation story. only read 30 chapters for now and the story is heavy mc focus with little or no development on side characters. World is interesting and diverse enough: from slaves, sects, to devil's and gods.
Bruh this Nivel something else ??? synopses had me thinkin it was a revenge novel. bulllllllShiiiiiiiit where is the backstabbing? Where is the revenge,wherE is the potential rival All we getting is a trAumAtized boy with trust issues and a potential harem that might not go anywhere becaue my guy Is always feelinglike something aint right ??u200d♂️??u200d♂️??u200d♂️??u200d♂️theonly thing i can give this novel is the writing quality is mad nice
personally the pacing to the story is a bit wrong as well as the mc and his powers and stuff just don't seem to mesh well with everything I believe that the story just doesn't flow together correctly but I do believe that should it go through a rewrite with a proofreader to help get the flow on track it will be wonderful
A little rough regarding the translation, but man, is it good! I really want to see this continue, the MC is different from common, despite being the classic OP.
